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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Dragonelf
You have done an great job with The Slayers of Dune Book II.

::Starts reading The Slayers of Dune Book III::

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An investment in knowledge always pays the best interest.
- Benjamin Franklin
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Comments from author:
Wow!! Thanks!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Mcspender
Funny thing about power, there's consequences, and sometimes, they can kill your soul.
Surayya found first hand out about it, and left Liam with a huge scar on his soul; maybe he should let it go, after all, it was Surayya's own choices what led her to that dark place she is now.

Cool series dude, see ya!!!.

E.T.A.: So, no uncle Dracula retired?? ; )
Comments from author:
The story of how Surayya got like that and how and why Liam came to the throne is a whole 'nuther story for another time.
The great thing about fiction is that any character is one ex machina plot device away from salvation.

I hated the thought of ending the series like that but Liam's motivations begged to be addressed. A man will do anyting for the woman he loves. Besides, there's a whole lot of time between Baby-Liam and Crazy-Surayya. So yes, there will be a Book III. But not anytime soon. I just realized it's been almost two years since I wrote "A Form of Eternity" and man are my fingers getting cramped.

I'm going to take a break from Dune and finish up some other stuff.

PS: Sorry, no Uncle Drac retirement home. When I kill them, they stay dead. However, there's always time-travel.

Have a great Christmas!!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [10 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 19" from Mcspender
And after a little tussle, Buffy and Surayya are cool again; good thing about thinking, it can get you very far.
At last, Liam can say that he's gonna have a good life, after all.
And yeah, the Destroyer is back, nice to see that dude around again =D.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Happy days are here again. Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Mcspender
So Suraya is something else now, and Buffy seems possesed by the first slayer??.
Lets see how this party rolls.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Surayya is evolving and getting uppity in the process like an Old One. This is but a glimpse of one possible evolutionary path.
This is what a slayer can become if all limits were removed.

The Enforcer is the Permanent Apocalypse.

The Destroyer didn't trust Buffy to be strong enough to kill all of her friends if necessary so he programmed a second personality to take over in case Buffy had to battle anybody she knew with any real power.

But, my girls are smart. I'm sure they're find a win-win situation before they have to kill each other.

or not.

Next chapter Soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 17" from Mcspender
Lucilla ascended, wonder what would happen now.
Ya know, I thnk you should make a fic about Faith, maybe in a crossover with The Hyperion Cantos by Dan Simmons??.
It's the only sci fi series that I can think off that deals with the themes in Faith's character development arch, besides, I can imagine such a fierce fighter like Faith against the Shrike .

Cool chapter, see ya!!
Comments from author:
Sounds interesting, but dude I'm still trying to finish my Kitty Fantastico stories AND I've still got got to do my Buffy vs the The Borg story.

But you never know what 2011 may bring.

Happy Thanksgiving!

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 16" from Mcspender
Poor Liam, knowing about the future can really suck the fun out of life; I hope he can really let go of his past and grow as his own person.

Cool chapter, see ya!.
E.T.A: About the playing with himself part, teh hehehehe!!.
And yeah, growing up it's trying to find a third way to solve things.
Comments from author:
Sure he can.
All he has to do let let his mother and Buffy die and watch the universe sink into to a 10,000 year long civil war.
But cha know a single change by one person can have profound effects like a stone dropped into a pond.

You'll see what I mean.

PS: Would'nt be funny if the the future war is caused by Liam constantly looping back in time?
PS2: Nobody commented about Liam playing with himself? Hello, Is this thing on?
PS3: Ikkitousen rocks!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [24 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 15" from Mcspender
Well, the war is won, it's time to win the peace.

By the way, Buffy's way is a good recipe for a 40k nightmare scenario, she really really need someone to hold her most absolutist impulses.

Hope Moto and the rest of the girl can help her.

And yeah, it's time to bring back the big guy, let's see what goes right this time... by the way, can shanshu Uncle Vlad??. I mean, dude's is kinda old and deserves a nice retirement spot in good ole Arrakis, talking about the good ole times and complaining about those whipper snappers slayers with no respec for the retired supernatural elders =D.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.

E.T.A. This is the 40k nightmare scenario: where war is endless, it's basically the good bad guys(Humans whose answer to a demon problem caused by somebody watching too much porn, varies from a small tactical group to a planet destroying bomb run) vs the bad worse guys(Aliens races like the Tau, a young and technologically-sophisticated civilization that work for the "greater good" of their empire and its inhabitants; the Necrons, soulless, living-metal constructs tricked into slavery by star-devouring creatures called the C'tan; the Eldar, an ancient and arrogant race whose psykers can predict the future, and their tainted and forsaken brethren, the Dark Eldar, who must consume the souls of others to make up for the loss of their own; the Tyranids, an all-consuming, all-organic, bio-engineered, extragalactic swarm; and the Orks, whose boisterous personality, tactics and biology make them the comic relief of the series).
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Comments from author:
"You kids with your scythe and your rock and roll music!! In my day, all people had were cheap wooden stakes and bad teeth."
Drac waves fist in the air.
The Slayers laugh and speed off in their brand new red dune buggy.
"Damn, whipper snappers!" Dracula mutters.

LOL!! : )

Well, lets just hope his 401k is well funded.

And what is a "40k nightmare scenario"?

Next Chapter Soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 14" from Mcspender
Cool battle, waay cool battle dude =D.
And yeah, the slayers are gonna have to learn the rules of the road very fast.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Hey, thanks man. I was worried there wasn't enough blood and violence. Seriously!

The thing about power, no matter how much of it you have, there's always something out there with more power, much more power.

By the end there will be surprises all around.

Next chapter soon!

PS: Buffy just won't stay dead!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 13" from Mcspender
Ok, the thing with the fog and the dead bodies lying... it's a classic uncle Dracula moment, always going for the theatrical =D.
Let's see how the Destroyer team can do the trick.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Team Destroyer,great name for a comic book or anime, is in for a rough ride and a few revelations.

Can't be the lord of the undead without a touch of the theatrical. The Nosferatu demand it. Now if only I can get him to say "I want to suck your blood." in a thick eastern European accent...

Next chapter soon, if I can keep these damn servers from organizing their rebellion and rising up against the Human race. : )
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 12" from Mcspender
“So let me get this straight.” Buffy said. “We are going to put our lives at stake to save Dracula from the slayers so that we can sacrifice him in order to bring back the destroyer of all things supernatural?”

“Yes.” Surayya said flatly.

When it comes to uncle Dracula, nothing is easy, ooh yeah =D!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
It's always good to be on the same page when trying to exert your will over the universe. And besides, it didn't sound ridiculous until Buffy said it aloud. : )

Next chapter soon!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from Mcspender
The kid does really gets around, hehehehe!!.
And well, the fish speakers have delivered a lot of light in the situation about who's in command, a lot of concentrated sunlight, shall we say??(Hey, I know it's a bad pun, but it fits the situation =P).

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Gotta love those new Hell Fighter class warships.
What? Did you think a few gigaton warheads was gonna leave a scratch on ships designed to fight in Hell itself?

And poor Drac, I think he's learning the definition of the word antiquated.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [17 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Mcspender
Yep, things are gonna get hot in Arrakis very soon, ooh yeah.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
As someone once said, nothing like having a soulless killing machine in charge of the fleet.

Fun will be had by all. Well not everyone.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Mcspender
Woah, aparently General Buffy is kinda hard ass; even in the future, she tends to believe her own propaganda :P.
Poor Dru, at least this time she got out of her mortal coil as herself, not like a vamp.

Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
The days of sleeping with demons are over. The days of being friends with demons are over. The word has been given. Destroy all monsters! And nothing bad can happen with a rigid interpretation of the mission, right? : )

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Mcspender
There's a looot of boom in the air tonight, and uncle Dracula is having a huge temper tantrum =P.

Let's see how far get Dru with her plan :P.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 7" from Mcspender
And Uncle Vlad got served for being such an naugthy boy; serves him right =D!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
But he is the hard headed type. I bet he does not take no for an answer.

Next Chapter Soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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