Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from Morgomir
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Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from ChaosLady
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These chapters have been very anticipated. They're wonderful and amusing! Excellent update!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from trongod
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I get the feeling that the Coven did even more than what Andromeda has found - duh!, I know - and that Faith is in for even more shocks, but hopefully she has /some/ time to heal and adjust to her new... family? situation? excursion into a typical Xander mess?
An excellent chapter, but too short dagnabbit!!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from liferscove
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Well I got a guess or 2 about that kid and what comes next but I'm going to keep it to myself and then crow to myself if I'm right.
nice work on the update.
Review By [liferscove] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from AllenPitt
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I sure hope it isn't Xander, because that would just be squicky at this point. Though hey, only cousins.... Not too many other possible candidates (that are already known characters, that is) for Faith's cousin. Now all you need to do is bring Connor into this somehow. Maybe Darla was a member of some wizarding family. Ok, 400 years back. So, maybe not. This is going to be one big happy family. And Dawn likes Draco? yeesh.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from Dmitri
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from LiastraLee
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I guess Xander could be Regulus' son... but that would be incesty.... maybe Oz?
Review By [LiastraLee] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from banditdoz
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Loving the character development more please :D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from deathgeonous
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Hmm, good chapter with a nice informative bit at the end. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from DragonBard
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Well, it's possible Willow could resurrect Sirius.
Of course, she'd only do it if he's not in Heaven, but she can at least check if the location of his soul.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from Starfox
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Oh, now I am wondering who is Regulus' son... Faith is getting a bigger Family than she ever expected.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fate has Led You Through It" from MistofRainbows
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I was enjoying the story until you killed Sirius. Enough had changed that he shouldn't have gone off like that without getting backup. The fact that Lucius died means that you have no excuse. You're butchering shit for your sick amusement. I can't see them actually arresting Narcissa... because honestly she wasn't exactly breaking the law... and at her social status with the money she had... Lucius would have heard about it and things wouldn't have happened... Basically it seems like you're trying to have things both ways... plus Andromeda wouldn't have taken Draco. Plus the Black house was nothing truly special... Dumbledore wouldn't need it... the crap for the necklace Regulus stole... it wouldn't have needed to be changed... (he should have visited the hiding place...) he would have just had to survive. Willow could reach into the veil and pull Sirius out... It's an interesting concept but it doesn't really work all that well... Faith being older doesn't fit with Sirius going to prison... not finding out he has a child... it's all sorts of screwed.
As for good points, It's interesting to see Faith with some interesting wizard powers...
Which brings me back to another bad point... Kreature trying to get Faith's father killed... there is no reason he would have done that... Sirius might not have actually told him to get out... if he was busy dealing with Faith... Anyways good luck on the story...
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fate has Led You Through It" from Dmitri
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This is a very interesting story. Please continue.
Nymphandora ... It's Nymphadora....... not the damn n... please fix it... it hurts to read it that way.
Comments from author:
Sorry. Thought I caught all of them. Hard to tell when I'm uploading the chapters from my phone and that pesky spellcheck doesn't include the HP lexicon.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated