Hi Great story, I really enjoyed the interaction between characters especially Clark and Dawn in this last chapter. Hope you get the inspiration back for this fic at some point! Thanks, Torg.
Review By [torgrim] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I must say I am enjoying reading this story this is a most interesting crossover, I do hope your Muse will let you update this story sooner rather than later .
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [11 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Are you ever gonna Update or finish this story? You have to! Wake up your muse!!
Comments from author:
I apologize I will finish the story eventually. My muse has been asleep for a while recently. I've attempted to kick start it a few times, but recently it's taken on another song. I may be able to redirect it.
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [13 Oct 11] • Not Rated
" Unlike in her dream, when Clark disappeared through the wall, Buffy couldn’t find her voice to scream". And I bet she's gonna be even more surprised when Clark returns and sends Glory through the other wall... kinda like the Nerima Wrecking Crew =P. Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm thinking that there are going to be a LOT of very surprised people in the Summers residence next chapter(s) as Glory finds out she isn't quite as bad as she thought she was... And Buffy'll have to have her jaw removed from the basement when Clark zips back in and starts pummeling the "all powerful" Glory.
And Dawn's going to go all cheerleader girl as she watches her crush - and future mate, 'cause that's what I figure Buffy's dream meant; besides, it'll take Clark just to keep both of them out of trouble, and he deserves the Summers Sisters action! - kick Glory around like a football...
Love how I read this chapter like, 3 times already and keep forgetting to leave my rev.
anyway, you're still going with the good, Molto Bene, as a writer I can also appreciate the cliffhanger, though they irritate the hell out of all readers.
hm...what else? Oh, the Spike thing, was that actually her or was that the Buffybot?
Comments from author:
I'll be hoping to add the next chapter within the next week or so. It's partly written, just I've been hitting a mental road block for the past bit. And the Spike thing was with the Buffybot.
Review By [nowhereman] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
i was so concentrated at the story and i almost had tears in my eyes feeling Dawn's emotions when it stopped .....damn....great story. more soon please.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad to know that my story is being enjoyed. I'm working on the next installment, but I'm busy the next week or so. I'll try to get it out as soon as possible. Thanks for the review!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Clark is immortal as far as I know. The Key is older than the Earth. Dawn seems human but I bet she is immortal too. Buffy is all to mortal. Clark and Buffy could get together and Buffy would die of old age before Clark got his first grey hair. Dawn could wait and get Clark in the long run if she thinks of it.
Or you could make it a Clark/Dawn from the start. Buffy does seem to have Spike after all.
Will Glory kill Clark? Can she kill Clark? Can her brain drain work on him? Can Clark kill Glory, even if it is needed?
Stupid superheros and the "no killing" hangup they have....
Comments from author:
All I have to say about pairings and such is that I have a plan. All your other questions will be answered eventually. The 'no killing' hangup may come into play... I don't feel like giving too many spoilers. Thanks for your interest and review!
Review By [Rune] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]