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Charming Vacation

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Review of chapter "Discoveries" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Nifty little story!!! Very delightful to read!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
It'd be cool to see a sequel to this. Maybe in Sunnydale when they have to face Adam.
Comments from author:
I wrote this story so long ago - nearly 6 years, wow - that it is doubtful to get a sequel. I'm thrilled that you'd enjoy seeing one, though.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [30 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Charming Vacation" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Loving the interaction between them in the alley. Not to mention Phoebe claiming that Willow was an innocent! RotFLMAO! For someone from the Scooby Gang to be considered someone that needs to be saved cracks me up. Not that it doesn't happen, just that it's unusual for a hero outside their group to do the saving.
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you enjoyed their meeting! At first, Phoebe had no way of knowing that Willow knew about what goes bump in the night. But that makes it all the more fun.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [30 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Charming Vacation" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
The concept for your story was awsome but I really think you could have expanded upon your ideas alot more. At the begining I got really into the story but in your next two parts it fell sort of flat and then just ended.
don't get me wrong I still loved the story but i think you could have done more with it.
Keep writing, I'd love yo see more of you stuff!

ZEA
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [14 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Charming Vacation" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
I liked your story, but I felt it was a bit anticlimactic. Your first two chapters were nice. You did a good job with all your characters and I liked the humor in your story. But your last chapter felt very rushed to me. I hope you have more to your story as I would like to read it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Charming Vacation" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Probably the most plausibly paced and characterized charmed cross over story I've ever read. Looking forward to reading more chapters.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [2 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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