Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dulcedecorumest
Short, simple and yet so effective. My heart skipped a beat when the great reveal came. Don't know how you did it but you managed to make me just as disoriented and unfocused that I too was frowning and trying to make sense of Dawn's explanation!
Nice touch about Faith being a firecracker and the bit about her jacket and her boots being there. Made it very poignant.
I want more! ; )
Review By [dulcedecorumest
] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from vladt
very good read, thank you.
Review By [vladt
] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
Damn, this was sooo good! Love the idea and Dean's reactions/thoughts were completely spot on. A daughter of Faith and Dean = Absolutely awesomeness and total cuteness as well! Lol.
Nice job all around!
Review By [LeaFairy
] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kiirei
I really like this. It would be interesting to read more of this universe... ^.^
Review By [Kiirei
] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Waverly
Fantastic. Sad but wonderful, love the characterization of Dean.
Comments from author:
Thanks much. Thought about writing a longer version of this verse, one where Faith didn't die but something happened and she told Dean about his daughter, maybe something big and bad was after her... don't know, having some writers block lately, so maybe if it comes it comes!
Review By [Waverly
] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Not Rated