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Review of chapter "Sorting it out (somewhat)" from raxadian
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Well, they basically got themselves a lighting demigod... yay?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wrestling (with dilemmas and others)" from raxadian
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Ah yes, wondering when the Scoobies would come knocking.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Active negotiations" from raxadian
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Funny, in the comics, there really was a powerful demon living in Metropolis.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breaking routine" from raxadian
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Yes First Evil, go mess up with a lighting Slayer, very smart.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Up a notch?" from raxadian
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Wait, not trying to steal electricity from somewhere else?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting a jolt" from raxadian
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Just great, she just became Thor without a the hammer weakness.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sorting it out (somewhat)" from Dragonelf
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I hope you will get inspired to write a sequel or get inspired to add more chapters to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sorting it out (somewhat)" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Good. Now that she's a Slayer, will she be getting a costume change? :)

Nice perspective on sensitivity to elements.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting a jolt" from Lilkitsu
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This is new, and fairly interesting, though I don't recall much about livewire, only saw her in the cartoon once years ago, but I like how this is going. She could make an interesting dark hero/anti-hero. I particularly like how since she's so much more connected to nature thru electricity that she actively seeks out the" wrongness" and fixes it simply for her comfort. It makes her being a slayer more believable, and gives a really good reason for why she would join the white hats, however bad she may be. Looking forward to more!
Review By [Lilkitsu] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sorting it out (somewhat)" from Tempi
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A short, but excellent story. I hope you have plans for a sequel.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sorting it out (somewhat)" from Gideon
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Cool story, not too serious but still fun. Livewire has a chnace to make something of herself by getting out of the city and Superman has fun beating up on some poor bodyguard. He better watch out through - he is not invulnerable to magic!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sorting it out (somewhat)" from Mcspender
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Short and tasty =).
So Callahan, and the Wolfram & Hart clique did the smart and ran away like nobody's bussines, how smart of them, very smart... and kinda cowardly, but, that's lawyers for you.
And Livewire went to see how the good guys side is, good for her =).
Any chance for a sequel?.

See ya!!.
Comments from author:
Maybe, but not any time soon. Any suggestions? I'm open to them.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sorting it out (somewhat)" from JoeB
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Wonderful.

I love a redemption story.

I'm hoping you have plans to continue this, Faith and Livewire teamed would be much fun.

Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the nice review. I am not sure where I am going to take it from here, but yeah, Faith and Livewire can get along like a house on fire (electric fire, that is).
Review By [JoeB] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wrestling (with dilemmas and others)" from SamDragon
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Willow and Dawn or Kennedy?
Comments from author:
Good guess!
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wrestling (with dilemmas and others)" from Mcspender
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“Well, if that’s how you want to play,” Superman said coolly.
Callaghan threw the grenade.

Wolfram & Hart think they know how to deal with someone like Superman, they are SO wrong; its gonna be very funny to see how Kal El deals with them.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Actually, Callaghan is on loan from the Taraka, so he's a bit trickier than that...
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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