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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
This seems like a reasonable start. One issue - if you're going to write in French to an English-speaking audience, and it's important that your audience understand what's being said, give your translations immediately, rather than waiting for the end of the chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the advice.
I've always put the translations at the end when I'm typing it on my computer, because that way I don't forget what they mean and by the time I post it, I forget to change the placement.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [17 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cmiller
Review:
this is interesting and I can't wait for more.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from andmddkdk
Review:
Okay, generally, I'm not a fan (in any concept of the word) of Twilight, and I barely managed to get through the first book in the series, and haven't read the others, but your disclaimer, which was really funny to me for some reason, as well the concept for your fic got me to read your prologue. So I could get into this...write on.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I actually hate Twilight myself(VAMPIRES DON'T SPARKLE!) and find the movies better than the books, which is something that almost never happens with me personally. The only reason I ended up reading the books is because my cousin forced me to.
But I'm glad you like the prologue and thanks for the review!
Review By [andmddkdk] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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