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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Great beginning, please don't leave it here!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from ashez
Review:
I'm not really sure why you had Joyce alive. She doesn't seem to add anything to the story. It's just distracting when she's speaking I keep thinking Xander's seeing The First or something... Still, I like this idea. I hope you decide to continue it someday.
Review By [ashez] • Date [27 May 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Blackett
Review:
More?
Review By [Blackett] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CelebwenTelcontar
Review:
Please continue! This is good!

CT
Review By [CelebwenTelcontar] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DesitaniaF
Review:
Bandos Godsword?! tchyeah Andrew, Sara is better... imho anyway
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Interesting.

I like who Xander's dad is but something feels off about the story thus far. The chapters are really short...and like someone else mentioned, Glory couldn't touch Dawn there at Camp so then there would be no slayer activation. Unless you created a diff reason for the First Evil. I can get that, that's not a major thing to me if you did change it. But without proper explanation you throw off your readers and they automatically throw up a wall as they read, never really allowing themselves to become engrossed because there's a lack of trust that this fic will be good.... does that make sense?

Basically, what I'm saying is I am very interested by this concept and LOVE seeing another fic in this verse, but I need to see some good explanations to show that this isn't going to be a 'wtf?' type fic with plotholes.

Interested to read more.

Thanks for sharing,
Luna
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
That went better than expected. LOL
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DHX
Review:
there is something about this story that does not make sense.

i thought that Xander hid dawn at the camp. if that was the case Glory could not get her hands on dawn to bleed her, which means the walls between realities stay intact and buffy does not have to do a swan dive to save dawn and the world. this means no resurrection, and thus no embalance for the first evil to exploit which means no season 7 end of the world scenario which needed the activation of the slayers.
Review By [DHX] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Cmiller
Review:
So wait who are all the Scoobies, and is Joyce alive? And if so was Faith there or something?
Comments from author:
Scoobies are Buffy, Xander, Willow and Giles. Joyce is alive as stated in the author's ntoe. Dawn is a hanger-on. not fuly a scoobie and not one of the newbies. Faith is up by the bus with the other survivors.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
LMAO! Poor Xander I don't envy him this conversation. LOL
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Sweet.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Kirallie
Review:
Poor Xander has a lot of explaining to do. Liked Giles squeaking in the background!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Cmiller
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okay can't wait for the explaination that should be interesting.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cmiller
Review:
this looks interesting and I hope for more soon.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Doodle
Review:
Good chapter. Though Buffy and Willow should give at least a sound of protest about him sliding down the side of the crater.

And maybe give the Gods' reactions to that many Slayers. Artemis' espessially if what I'm thinking the title means.
Review By [Doodle] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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