This was lovely. Definitely a little bit sad, and nice and angst-y in some parts, but I still enjoyed reading it. Your Puck voice was really well done and I loved the ending with Puck and Rachel together in her bathroom.
Thanks for writing!!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I thought it was just going to be a bit of a fluff piece and then he grew up on me. Puckleberry is my go-to Glee pairing, so it tends to slip in.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Its a wonderful story that turns into a lovely story when it gets to the ending. I love how you wrote the Rachel and Puck relationship...I have read the whole series several times are we ever going to read one focused on Rachel? I am curious about Rachel and her relationship with Sophie (being a big sister), her dads, Puck and Quinn before during and after the birth of Sophie.
Review By [GeekGoddess] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Not Rated
I was expecting this to be all humor, but instead it got more and more insightful and poignant throughout, culminating in that beautiful bit of writing where Puck heaves his guts out in Rachel's bathroom and tries to imagine a world of being loved by one's parents and considered 'good enough' (which nicely summed up all the bits and pieces).
Comments from author:
I was actually expecting this to be all humor, too, but it grew and I let it and I liked where it went. I'm glad you liked where it went, too.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Not Rated