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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Review:
Oh, my! That's definitely going to make life interesting for Xander (methinks he's going to be learning bunches from a whole host of "interesting" people) while preparing for whatever is supposed to happen. I can't help but wonder if some of that prophecy ties into the actions of the Mesan Alignment; that could *really* make life interesting, particularly if demons are also involved somehow (a Mesan experiment gone sideways, perhaps?).
Comments from author:
Xander's life has *always* been interesting - as in the old Chinese proverb, "May you live in interesting time" - so why should a change of location make things any different? ;-)

And yes, he's definitely going to be learning a lot of new and useful things as he tries to figure out exactly what the prophecy might be describing.

Hopefully, my muse will turn her attention back to this story and help me get the next chapter written up soon.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [16 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AkashaDrake
Review:
Funny that he should mention the Scooby Gang...


But in summary, the prophecy says that when Glory comes for the Key, the Slayers will sacrifice their lives to close the Portal....and the Hellmouth.

And the Scooby Gang will return, most likely with Xander being the first of the group. But s far, it seems that the only part which would occur after Xander defends Allison, is the rebirth of the Scooby Gang, probably to fight a resurgence of demons in the Star Kingdom/Empire and the surrounding regions.
Comments from author:
An interesting theory, but I can neither confirm nor deny its accuracy. ;-)
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh interesting, very interesting.
Now please continue this! [grin]
Comments from author:
More will appear as my muse dictates.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Great Start! Dying of curiosity... You gonna continue?
Comments from author:
Yes, this will be continued, but when is up to my muse's whim. ;-(
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Antaeus
Review:
why have you not continued this? you should. i like where you have gone with it so far. and you already have an annoying prophecy very nice.
Comments from author:
I'm stalled on the next chapter, and waiting for my muse to inspire me again. ;-(
Review By [Antaeus] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the story so far, I hope you will be adding more to this soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Working on the next chapter as Real Life and my muse's whims allow. ;-)
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IcemanII
Review:
I just found this series. Very, very interesting, great series so far. I really enjoy this fic, it's a lot of fun. It looks really promising and fun. Keep up the good work, hope to see more!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Hopefully, my muse will turn her attention back to this series, and let me finish the next currently only half-written chapter. ;-)
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [16 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Netchka
Review:
More please! Good story. Hope to read more about Xander and the Prophecy soon. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Working on thsi one as my muse dictates, so it's started but not anywhere near rady to post.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [5 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from storiescollector
Review:
I know you're busy and not inspired (not, not interested) or too busy (damn RL), but I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. The premise is quite interesting. Looking forward to Xander's future actions as the agent of chaos...
Comments from author:
It's not that I'm not interested - it's that my muse's attention wanders, and I'm also fairly busy in Real Life at the moment, too.

I know where this is going. I just have to find the time to get it written.
Review By [storiescollector] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
You ^HAVE^ to keep going on this! You can't just leave us hanging!
Comments from author:
I'm trying, but my muse's attention is focused elsewhere at the moment. ;-(
Review By [Genuka] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpacedCadet
Review:
More ?

PLEASE!
Comments from author:
Well, there's definitely more planned. It's just a matter of finding the time to write it, and Real Life not getting in the way. ;-(
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slasher
Review:
I really like where this is going! Are you planning on writing more? I really hope so!!!
Comments from author:
Yes, I will definitely be writing more of this. Just no idea when I'll get to it.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [slasher] • Date [17 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Ok, this sounds interesting, I shall put it on track and hope you do some more.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
More is definitely planned. It's just finding the time to write it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AkashaDrake
Review:
Let's see.

Listen up, people, so you'll know what's going to happen

Dr. Alison Harrington's going to be attacked, and there's going to be this guy that tries to help before Nimitz takes it out. We'll call him the Paladin for convenience. He is a white knight type, that's for sure.

Problem is, he's been taken from his home. Well, Dr. H. Will adopt him, and he's going to be looking for a lot of info, so that his family in Sunnydale are safe instead of dead.

Well, he's going been chosen, along with an old guy that is the head of his family(Mayhew?) to face the demons and all, and they'll kick vampire ass.

When Glorificus shows up looking for her Key, the Slayers will give up their lives to stop her and close the hellmouth.

A lot of people will die, but that will lead to evil getting it's ass kicked, and the fallen good will be the leaders of those who keep people alive and all right until it's time

Then all hell breaks loose, and the people who are on the side of good will reveal the existence of demons, making it impossible for the demons to win.

That's all I can tell for sure about the meaning of the prophecy. Sound about right?
Comments from author:
I really can't say much about the prophecy right now, but you're right on some parts, and completely off-base on others. I hope I can get the next chapter done soon, but I make no promises.
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from oldgirllost
Review:
Looking forward to reading how Xander explains "Scions of the dog who spoke" to Honor, Benjamin, and Co., (Wonder if they have Sooby Doo episodes on file in the same place where Honor dug up the Samurai movies that the Graysons based their sword work on?)

Hope to see more soon.

Thanks
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story.

And Xander is going to have a lot explanations to make before he even gets to trying to explain the Scooby-Doo cartoons. ;-)
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [15 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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