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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from KrisB
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I've generally liked how the halloween night went here. I hate to say it, but this one I had to read the comments and re-read the fic to even start matching up who bought what. I think most have IDed everyone except Xander.

You've already mentioned several times who he isn't. At first, I thought he was John Christian Falkenberg, but the description of what he was wearing is rather different.

You made Harmony into Agatha Hetrodyne? I'd think that would be a few of Cordy's crew might have been in that crowd. I've still not IDed who went as Gil. I'd actually like him to be someone like Johnothan.

Oh, I'm fine with you down scaling the dragon slave. It sort of had to be done. I'm not sure how adjustable that spell is, but you'd think that she could adjust the radius of effect or have other similar spells to operate on a "smaller area of effect" level. Dragon Slave, I always thought of taking out an entire cities worth of area. You are aiming for a cemetery and maybe a few blocks beyond. I'm sure she has a spell that could do it, but the only one we know that is a kill everything is dragon slave and it goes with the character. You were forced with that or fireball.

I'm liking the Daisy Duke spin that got put on Buffy. I'm not sure your plans on that. I don't recall the character's history other than just a hot background girl. It would be fun if she actually picked up skills like moon shining and other odds and ends from there. Daisy will give Buffy an entirely different outlook on being the normal stacked girl around.

Well, with your pacing, I can see two more chapters of the fic before Halloween starts to get over. You'd need one of several groups gathering at the library. The actually dealing with Ethan isn't a big deal. It's if you have them bump into and handle Spike before hand though. Hmm, I'm wondering which group that you might have in that role.

One person that I've not noticed anywhere is Liam. He usually winds up at Buffy's in these things, but I've not seen any one that he might have dressed as. Well, if you are making this a SGC cross, you've tossed in enough named characters with skill sets that can play the mad scientist role.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
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Well, it sounds like Sammy Z is DEFINITELY going to have to talk to Giles. And, if Giles figures out what Ethan is up to, there will be trouble. Trouble that may cause THE RIPPER to come out to play!
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Infinix
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You get a massive number of points just for using some of my favorite characters, Richard especially. The fact that this seems rather well written makes me very happy. The repercussions of some of these characters though... it will be very interesting where you take this.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from raxadian
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Well... just the Sparks will be trouble.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from raxadian
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Oh, I wonder who that is?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from raxadian
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Girl Genius? Oh boy.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from JoeDineen
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Need to re-read but delighted that you are stil around and updating stories
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from raxadian
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It would be fun if someome dressed as Loki.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from war
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Can't imagine what Gil and Agatha will do to Sunnydale in the time they are there.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
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Natasha and Boris? Cool.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from IronOx
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It scares me a little that I recognized ALL the costumes. I think the biggest surprise was Sh'kaira - I'm afraid to even think what Hotblood would say to her about the taste of vampires.
Review By [IronOx] • Date [7 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
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LOVE what you got for Jenny and Giles! *MRS Peel, we're needed!* Once I saw the descriptions I KNEW it was Avengers time! *Plays Avengers theme song*
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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Snyder and his lady going as Boris and Natasha? THIS, I have to see!
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from JediKnight
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Very nice job on the story so far, I wish I knew where all the Daculas came from as well as the red-headed Natasha and John Christian Falkenberg. I hope to read more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from GraysonPaladin
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Ok let me see... Girl Genus, The Avengers, various forms of Dracula, Slayers, Stargate... and a lot that I don't recognize. Good god you really should give a list.
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [16 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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