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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dulcedecorumest
Review:
I gave this a 9 only because it was too short. This was brilliant as per usual FW! Great follow-up and I cannot wait to read more. It's weird how sometimes its hard to imagine the WB with significant others that are there for the long haul, as they lead the lives they lead, but I can totally see them raising a child together. *don't get me wrong, Wincest freaks me out but I mean as two brothers, as a family.*

And Sam being able to be... well like an "Auntie" cause he's such a girl in comparison to Dean or maybe Better Adjusted... just makes it so awesome.

Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us. Excellent job as per usual.

xx Dulce
Comments from author:
Thanks much and sorry about the shortness, I'm saving a longer fic for when little Angel is just a bit older, but I promise there'll be more to come! I agree, Sam and Dean raising a kid together would be awesome. Coolest kid on the planet, smart like Sammy and a total bad ass like Dean. Glad you liked and thanks for reading!
Review By [dulcedecorumest] • Date [17 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
Review:
Aww, this was lovely! Dean's thoughts were adorable and wonderfully done... He's handling himself remarkably well for someone who just found out he's a father.

Also the name Angel is just perfect for Dean and Faith's daughter. Nicely done.

Fabulous little ficlet!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [9 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Waverly
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Excellent. Great characterization of Dean as usual, love the hair-braiding detail, its so Dean to worry about that :D
And the image of Sam playing Candyland with a 5 year-old is just freakin' adorable.
Comments from author:
Isn't it tho? I picture him being more at ease with her because well, the obvious, she's not HIS daughter, but he just relates to people better than Dean usually does, so it made sense that he'd get along with his five year old niece right off the bat. Thanks for reading, look for more to come, I keep getting little popups of ideas.
Review By [Waverly] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from andmddkdk
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Keep going. I like this idea of yours. With fan art, it'd be really dynamic and interesting, the ficlets with the imagery. Look forward to either, and more :).
Review By [andmddkdk] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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