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Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from Chikageko
Review:
making with the massive huh?
Comments from author:
A city on another plane was mostly destroyed.
All of their builders/crafters were killed in the battle.
They need people who can build/craft to help them rebuild the city.
Since they have a lot of magic - in order to be brought over, you have to have been touched by magic, or the transition could kill you.
It'll take them about six months to rebuild - once they have people who can tell them how do to it. But only eight days on earth would have passed during that time.
Xander has agreed to help.
Once written, other chapters will show other people being recruited, as well as what's going on at the construction sites.

Hope that helped clarify.

-MavenAlysse
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [11 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from Doodle
Review:
Where is he? With Gods, or with the Powers that Be? Olympus maybe?
Comments from author:
You know, I'm not exactly sure, myself. I know it's not the Powers that Be - I honestly don't think they'd ask Xander for much of anything - they don't seem to like him much.

The gods of Olympus wouldn't really need Builders and Craftsmen, since they can just use their powers.

The group isn't demonic or angelic - but it could be a different dimension along the lines of Pylea, or another plane.

I'm up for any suggestions. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

-MavenAlysse
Review By [Doodle] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from (Recent Donor)CaptainBoulanger
Review:
Abby from NCIS would work as well. She's from New Orleans and has previously been known to volunteer with Habitat. (As an electrician, I think, but she's got to know something useful.)
Comments from author:
ooooooohhh.... I did not know that. Coolness. Thanks for letting me know. I have a much clearer idea of what the next chapter is going to look like. :)

Thanks for the review.

-MavenAlysse
Review By [(Recent Donor)CaptainBoulanger] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from ora
Review:
This shows much promise
Comments from author:
Thanks! ::beaming joyfully::

And thank you for reviewing.

-MavenAlysse
Review By [ora] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from sistercity
Review:
Note concerning the review from TwoBlackDragons:
The usage of 'decimate' is correct. While it does mean kill, it also means "to destroy a large part of". In reference to a city it is fine.
Comments from author:
Thank you for helping clear that up.

I hope you enjoyed the story.
If things go well, I should have another chapter up soon.

-MavenAlysse
Review By [sistercity] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from sistercity
Review:
Ooh, even Gibbs from NCIS could be collected, as he has building skills. It doesn't matter that he has apparently only done boats, they might need them too!
Comments from author:
True.
And since he hangs out with Abby so much - plus all the different cases he's been on - he probably has been touched by magic. Even if he doesn't know about it himself.

I like. I'll definitely see what I can do with that.

Thanks for the review. :)

-MavenAlysse
Review By [sistercity] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
You might look up the meaning of decimated, it's not what you think it is.
Comments from author:
To destroy or kill a large part of....

And their city was decimated. Not completely destroyed, but in definite need of being rebuilt.

Thanks for reviewing.

-MavenAlysse
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from ringobook
Review:
A very good start...Please write more on it...
Comments from author:
I'll try. :)
'Course, you're welcome to add to it yourself. :)

Thanks for reviewing!

-MavenAlysse
Review By [ringobook] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks! :)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Drink To Me Only" from Hecatonchires
Review:
Other builders:
Luke from Gilmore Girls
Gibbs from NCIS
Arthur Mitchell from Dexter s4
Thor, Marvel Comics (It is a smithing hammer)
Forge, Marvel Comics
Henry, Eureka
Comments from author:
Cool. I only recognize a few of them (Haven't had cable in years), but I can definitely see Gibbs, Thor, and Forge as possiblities.

So.... planning on writing one? ::smile:: It's an open forum.

Thanks for the ideas. :)

-MavenAlysse
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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