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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SlowMercury
That's a pretty grim ending! Well done, though. You had some grammar and punctuation mistakes, but all in all great effort!
Comments from author:
There will be a third part that will tie up several plot-lines and explain some stuff that was never really explained in the Pokemon franchise.
Sorry about the punctuation and grammar mistakes. That happened because English is not my native language. Sometimes the grammar simply gets mixed up and if your native language is German (where you have tons of exceptions to the grammar rules) I bet it looks rather strange.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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