I am really enjoying this story a great deal. I don't know if you're planning on continuing it or not, but it really is quite a great tale. Very original concept. I am liking how you're changing canon around rather than just marching forward with it but inserting Xander. Good stuff all around.
Review By [hjdevnull] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Godfather" from garrycooper
Review:
It's very good. Looking forward to more, when life lets you out of its claws.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Not Rated
An awesome new chapter with some interesting new twists. I hate I missed it when it came out but thank goodness for spring break allowing me five minutes to catch up. And if I had reviewed back then you couldn't get this little ego boost now. Please write more when real life and your muse allow.
Re-read this cool story and I'm wondering if this will be updated?
I am just wondering how the tri-wizard will be will be changed?
I also realized that if Xander found out about the prophecy and no one tried to stop it, or do anything else to it, there will probably be a scream of rage that could be heard in Sunnydale and everyone would be wondering where it came from and why it almost sounds like Xander, except he is in the room with them. Just my thought. LOL.
Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Wonderful. I really love this last chapter in the way you explained why Xander wasn't involved with his godson, how the deatheaters got into the house and Nev's problem with magic in such a short time, although I do have to wonder why Lockheart was messing with the poor boys memory in the first place what could a baby know that would make that man want to remove the memory? I really love how Xander stopped the howler from interrupting the meal. I am eagely awaiting the next installment.
Review By [twlight] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
A little late but I'm thrilled to see an update in this story. About time someone took Madame Longbottom to task for how she treats Neville. And Xander is just what Neville needs.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Not Rated