Review of chapter "When the Dam Breaks, There's Hell to Pay" from krittab
Review:
This story is awesome! I love all the familial bonding :)
Review By [krittab] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When the Dam Breaks, There's Hell to Pay" from leelaa
Review:
Love the new chapter. Hope real life and the muses let you add another chapter soon. Eagerly waiting to see the next part in this fic. Thanks for a great read. :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When the Dam Breaks, There's Hell to Pay" from slmncpm
Waiting patiently for whensoever real life and your muses cooperate. Anything at all to take the story forward would be lovely. But any chance of an update in this coming month, please? Or maybe the month after that? Anyway, thanks for a great read. :)
Comments from author:
Sorry it took a while, but I just posted another chapter. I had it almost written for a while. It took me a bit of time to finish it and then it had to go to my beta. Thanks for the encouragement!
Review By [leelaa] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I like Alice but how you have this set up works and I think it is pretty good so far. I can't wait to read more so please update soon.
Comments from author:
I like Alice too, but I was curious to see how this would play out. Actually, this is the first of a trilogy. The second part is going to be How Isabella Swan Became Bella Cullen and the third part is going to be How _____ _____ (name to be determined) Became Alice Cullen. So, there is hope for Alice yet, just not in this story...
I may write them simultaneously, but I'm not sure yet. I have the beginnings of both other stories sketched out, so we'll see.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
really liked this, probably because Jasper is my favorite from the twilight books. I'm guessing this is completely AU, does Alice exist at all? Please do continue.
Comments from author:
I've decided that Alice doesn't exist--yet! I'm thinking there will be three stories overall. This first one is Jasper joining the Cullens. The second is Edward falling in love with Bella and Jasper's reactions to that and the third is Jasper meeting a very human reincarnated Alice.
I am about to post another chapter, so thank you for the encouragement!
Review By [liability] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Not Rated