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Return of the Resident Bad Boy

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Review of chapter "II. First Run-In" from purrfus
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Since the story idea apparently concerns all of these characters as adults, getting them into contact with each other and keeping them in touch is obviously important.

That said, having them all at Hogwarts as teachers pushes the suspension of rationality that all fan fic readers must possess to its outer limits. The story is Draco / Ginny, but in order to go forward and bring readers along some explanation / justification as to how and why they all ended up in this place at this time needs to be in the story. Sometimes a chat over tea can be a good way to catch readers up on the character's history, but in this case with so many characters to provide background on and for, I don't think its going to be quite that easy.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I. Welcome Back" from purrfus
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There are some mechanical issues - grammar, tense shifting, etc. - but something kept me reading. I think the Draco voice - mature, calm. I want to know how he got there.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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