Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alkeni
Nice little fic. Its enjoyable enough, like a little window into a wider story.
Review By [Alkeni
] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BerserkerNW
Oooh, that was fun! Cordy and Kate as Immortals... ^_^
If you ever decide to continue this, I would be interested in reading it. Was Cordy already an Immortal when she went into her coma? If so, how did she manage to get pregnant so often? Or was that just because of the demonic daddy aspect.... Thanks for sharing this!
Review By [BerserkerNW
] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TDK
Cordelia as an immortal? She comes from a series where several of the main characters grew up together how does that work? Unless you are saying that she died and woke up again sometime in the Angel series becuase you should remember that she was dieing from the visions.
Comments from author:
Yes, that was supposed to be the inference...sorry went back and I'd apparently put "decades" in a spot that was supposed to say "years"...it's all fixed now and should make better sense :)
Review By [TDK
] • Date [15 Sep 10] • Rating [1 out of 10]