Ooh, awesome beginning! Don Summers. *snorts* They all are going to be in for a big surprise when Dawn shows up :) And don't worry about the angst, I liked it and it worked rather well with what just happened. John's death.
I can't wait to read more! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Oh this is going to be fun. Don Summers, hmm? They are certainly in for a surprise. I wonder who Dawn was visiting at Stanford. Please update again soon!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Not Rated
I really loved this first chapter. It was straight-up and lots of fun. I can't wait until "Don" shows up--heehee, I think it's great that Ellen didn't correct Bobby on that one. :D Nice job!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm having some fun with "Don"!
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]