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Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Dark Angel" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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They sell supplements in health food stores that would have kept Xander fine and dandy.

Not telling his friends about the supernatural would keep vamps from thinking they were food because?

What effect did the swim team incident have on him?

The problem with suping Xander up and keeping the plotline the same is it requires him to be a complete bastard who lets friends die to keep his secret.
Comments from author:
You're right of course. Not really planning on taking it anywhere; just wanted to ditch the idea. Thanks for the comment though, I've always enjoyed your stories (and godogma's typing).
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [5 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Crysis" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Promising start. I only recognize SG, but it still held my interest.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [5 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Dark Angel" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written insertion of Manticore and a great sense of family on the mission and ending on a cliffhanger with the Initiative. Great stuff, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Crysis" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great opening, the only problem I spotted was both Colonel Hausfield and the Dallas called Xander by both Corporal and Sergeant. I really hope you decide to develop this, well done.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I must have missed one when I went back through, thanks for catching that.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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