Looking good so far and things not looking so good for Angel/Angelus or the PTB. I'm gonna take a guess that this is massively AU since if they had already been to Atlantis then O'neill(spelled with two l's)would be a general already and I would have thought that a advanced AI would detect the two goa'uld ships being destroyed early on in the SG1 series let alone the massive fleet of Anubis that was destroyed by the Ancient Outpost with the help of O'neill. Just a little curious and I am definitely looking forward to more of this. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Comments from author:
yes its a lot au because I wanted Jack still leading SG1 and need SGA later on. In regards to the AI. The answer would have been yes....if she was at 100% which she wasn't as u read. Tx for the review
Review By [Alastor] • Date [20 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Love the story so far keep up the awesome writing! Brad
Comments from author:
thank you for the review and for this story I can promise u a new chapter soon, because it is already written and I just wait to get it back from my fabulous beta.
Review By [rankokunathree] • Date [6 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
somewhat interesting story. spotted a slight error though: you have angelus alive and killing 300 years ago, but if i recall correctly, he is 240 or so odd years old.
Comments from author:
i know, but not really an error for this story...more about that after he has his appearance
Review By [KingDarius] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated