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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Gray
Review:
Interesting start. Enjoyed the PR references.
Comments from author:
tx for the review and nice you noted them.
Review By [Gray] • Date [21 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Valandar
Review:
"Xander Harris: Currently dead in Alex's Base"

'Currently" dead? Hmm... interesting way to phrase it. :P
Comments from author:
It is, isn't it? As you my have noted being dead doesn't always stick with the scoobies :)
Tx for the review.
Review By [Valandar] • Date [21 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Alastor
Review:
Looking good so far and things not looking so good for Angel/Angelus or the PTB. I'm gonna take a guess that this is massively AU since if they had already been to Atlantis then O'neill(spelled with two l's)would be a general already and I would have thought that a advanced AI would detect the two goa'uld ships being destroyed early on in the SG1 series let alone the massive fleet of Anubis that was destroyed by the Ancient Outpost with the help of O'neill. Just a little curious and I am definitely looking forward to more of this. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Comments from author:
yes its a lot au because I wanted Jack still leading SG1 and need SGA later on. In regards to the AI. The answer would have been yes....if she was at 100% which she wasn't as u read. Tx for the review
Review By [Alastor] • Date [20 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Narf
Review:
Wow not bad at all keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
thank you for the review
Review By [Narf] • Date [20 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Addlcove
Review:
looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
tx for the review and there will be more....just takes a bit of time
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [20 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Raider
Review:
very nice fic, really liking the highlander and stargate elements.
Comments from author:
tx for the review nice it's still read even if it takes me ages to update
Review By [Raider] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DarthPayne
Review:
Very nice to see another chapter in this fic. :)
Comments from author:
tx and I know shame on me...but I just can't beat a snail writing speed wise....
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from rankokunathree
Review:
Love the story so far keep up the awesome writing!
Brad
Comments from author:
thank you for the review and for this story I can promise u a new chapter soon, because it is already written and I just wait to get it back from my fabulous beta.
Review By [rankokunathree] • Date [6 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolflady
Review:
Just read this story for the first time and enjoyed it. You said you tweeked Xander's age 'a bit'. Four years is a bit?
Comments from author:
actually that's not only Xander...I pushed the whole BVTS verse date wise up a bit and nice that you enjoyed it.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from gaulty
Review:
good chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Well, that's an interesting twist. I look forward to seeing where you go with this. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
thank you for the review
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [5 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from KingDarius
Review:
somewhat interesting story. spotted a slight error though: you have angelus alive and killing 300 years ago, but if i recall correctly, he is 240 or so odd years old.
Comments from author:
i know, but not really an error for this story...more about that after he has his appearance
Review By [KingDarius] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Selias
Review:
I'm guessing from the reactions of Miras and the black haired woman that they can't interfere with Alex?
Comments from author:
sorry can't really answer that without giving to much away
Review By [Selias] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
thank you for the review and more will be coming
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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