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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka

Review:

Wow! An amazing beginning and it could easily spiral out of control. I can't wait to see what happens! More please!

Comments from author:

Thanks for the review.

Review By [Genuka] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ReadsaLot

Review:

Nice little slices - with so many ways a story could grow from it.

One nit - early on you have "Burnett" when the word should be "brunette" in reference to Dawn's hair color.

Comments from author:

Thanks for the review. I will correct the word. It's nice to have other people to check my work. I was thinking about doing another part to the story or issue a challenge.

Review By [ReadsaLot] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mmooch

Review:

Ack! How can you mark this complete?!

Comments from author:

I'm finished with it. I may do another short on it or I may not. I have not decided yet. Or I may add a challenge.

Review By [mmooch] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Not Rated

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