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John Sheppard's Dreams

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Wow! An amazing beginning and it could easily spiral out of control. I can't wait to see what happens! More please!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ReadsaLot
Nice little slices - with so many ways a story could grow from it.

One nit - early on you have "Burnett" when the word should be "brunette" in reference to Dawn's hair color.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I will correct the word. It's nice to have other people to check my work. I was thinking about doing another part to the story or issue a challenge.
Review By [ReadsaLot] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Ack! How can you mark this complete?!
Comments from author:
I'm finished with it. I may do another short on it or I may not. I have not decided yet. Or I may add a challenge.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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