Review of chapter "A bridesmaid, not a bride..." from RngrThorne
Review:
This is actually a very good chapter. Having Buffy obsess over getting a hug/kiss/some Angel action was perfect!
Review By [RngrThorne] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A bridesmaid, not a bride..." from lillyb
Review:
your doing great keep up the good work. this is a good piece to cut your teeth on but don't get bogged down trying to please everyone else, your writing this for your self not them:)
Comments from author:
I won't try to please everyone but I do know that others have more experience than I do. All suggestions will be considered, good ones I'll use if I can.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A bridesmaid, not a bride..." from RafMereC
Review:
Okay. I'm hooked.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Raf
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reviews. I'm open to any ideas anyone has, yours especially. It is not that great a story, not yet anyway. If I can get it finished I'll then start on a re-write to polish it.
And Thanks Oh So Very Much for the recommendation!
I'll try to grow into a writer that deserves it. :)
ps I hope you're hand is better.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
RngrThorne