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Review of chapter "Halloween" from loretta
Review:
this is an interesting story, i hope you decide to continue it one day
Review By [loretta] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Interesting fic, it would be very nice if you continued it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from NimbustheMariner
Review:
Rather fun, and it would be interesting to explore the consequences of this.
Review By [NimbustheMariner] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from WolfWriter
Review:
This REALLY needs expanding. I'm sure I'm not the only one to say so.

I know that Real Life can be a pain in the posterior; my own writing has kind of gone to the wayside because of it.

However, I have faith that this will be updated and expanded upon soon enough.

This is still an excellent read, even after all these months.

Please update soon.

I would really like to see the reactions of Willow's and Xander's parents to the changes in their children.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Narf
Review:
Hell of a story keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Semet
Review:
Oh how I wish you would continue this at some point. But hey that's up to you ^^. None the less I would love to read more.
Review By [Semet] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from MrPowell
Review:
I just found this piece, and quite enjoyed it. The change in characters was drastic, but believable.
As a minor nitpick on one of the responses you made in one of your reviews, Elrond may not have been the smith that reforged Narsil into Andruil, but he was a lord of the Noldor, the Elven race best known for their craftsmen, and the great-grandson of Turgon Lord of Gondolin, who was famous for his metalwork, including several sculptures and at least one set of armor and weapons, so it is no small leap of faith to believe that he was capable of making elven swords, if not on par with Glamdrig (Gandalf's sword which was from Gondolin). Galadriel, who was also nobility among the Noldor, was occasionally known to craft things as well, the best known example were of course the cloaks worn by the fellowship after Lorien, which she made with the help of her handmaidens.
Edit: Elrond was the great-grandson of Turgon, not grandson... forgot Earendil was Elrond's dad not Tuor...
Review By [MrPowell] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from CelebwenTelcontar
Review:
Please, please continue! When is this? Have Galadriel and Elrond gone to the Uttermost West yet, and thus is Arwen married to Aragorn? Do Galadriel and Elrond remain mother and son-in-law, as Elrond married Celebrian, Galadriel's daughter? Will Elrond begin missing Celebrian, Elladan, Elrohir, and Arwen (his wife and children), and will Galadriel miss Celeborn and Celebrian (her husband and daughter)? Does Celebrian ever make an appearence, and how is she affected by the torture the Orcs in the Misty Mountains inflicted upon her?

CT
Review By [CelebwenTelcontar] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from fayefree
Review:
Love this. Please more soon.
Review By [fayefree] • Date [27 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Orchamus
Review:
Truly a rather good start. I would be most interested to see it taken further.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Orchamus
Review:
Definitely worth more.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from WolfWriter
Review:
Just read this again, because I had forgotten about it. Shame on me!

I still like the premise, but I have a suggestion/question.

Would/Could you think about bringing SG:1 into the mix? After all, two teenagers changing that much, literally overnight, is going to raise some eyebrows.
Comments from author:
As much as I love SG1 crosses (and I have to stop myself from crossing over too much) my counter-point would be ... it's Sunnydale! Although, I did say that even Xander's parents couldn't ignore the change...

Food for thought.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Narf
Review:
not bad at all keep up the good work thanks.
Review By [Narf] • Date [15 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
*cackles gleefully*
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [13 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from annararen
Review:
Feels a bit rushed.. other than that, it was a very nice read, definitely worth reading.
Review By [annararen] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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