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Review of chapter "Muggle Literature" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
I've got more scenes for this, but they need a bit more tweaking. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Muggle Literature" from lothlorien
Review:
The Twins reading Alice in Wonderland... I can't decide if it's extremely appropriate or just plain scary. Probably both...
Comments from author:
I was thinking both actually. ^_^

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Chocolate Museum" from lothlorien
Review:
Taking Xander to a chocolate factory... the perfect apology. And then when he's all hyper like... well I'm sure they can find something to keep him distracted :P
Lovely little bit. You did well
Comments from author:
I think you meant to say that they'd find the perfect way of getting rid of his sugar high. *cheeky grin*

Much as I love Côte d'Or, it seemed best to not use it. *pouts*
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [12 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Face-Off" from lothlorien
Review:
Oh Cordelia... such a bitch. That's why we love her :P I love how everyone can interpret Oz's minute face movements. You should write a bit from the POV of a non-Scooby - Can you imagine the confusion they'd feel at watching a conversation between say Xander and Oz?
Don't you just love that I keep giving you new plot bunnies :P
Comments from author:
I can't imagine them -not- knowing what Oz's facial expressions mean.

Plot bunnies?! I told you to stop giving them to me, for crying out loud! *glares*

Why would you do that to me?! *wails* I thought you liked me?
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Face-Off" from cryefourme
Review:
Your not handsome your beautiful Like a woman LMBO love it. HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA.

And Lothlorien Its just a fluke this time. I didnt mean to. Honest. POUTS.
Comments from author:
A fluke? It is not! You did you purpose. :p

Isn't that the kind of thing that Cordelia would tell a pretty man such as Devon? At least in my imagination he's more pretty than ruggedly handsome.

Very glad you liked it. *grins*
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Devon Will Be Devon" from lothlorien
Review:
Darnation, foiled again... by crye no less. Damn you.

Still, lovely chapter. It totally has potential to grow... aren't any of the male Weasleys still free? Bill? Charlie?
Comments from author:
Whoa, wait, there are no plans to continue with this, this -Devon- thing. Stop trying to give me plot bunnies!

Besides all Weasley men are taken: Arthur&Molly, Bill&Fleur, Charlie&Andrew, Ron&Hermione and George&Xander&Fred. *smug*

You should totally tell Crye yourself that you don't like it when you're not the first reviewer. In fact, head on over to the comment war at weird_minds (on the newest pic I added). We're both on -- when Crye can tear herself away from her writing. *cheeky grin*
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [13 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Devon Will Be Devon" from cryefourme
Review:
LMAO, I could SOOO see Devon do/say just that. HHHHMMM And I could also see Ron's ears flame and that extra skip in his step as he runs for his bottoms sake away.
Comments from author:
Don't you need your a$$? It holds up your pants, doesn't it? LOL

I'm very glad you liked reading this. And thanks for reviewing. *grins*
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [13 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Acting Like Little Kids" from lothlorien
Review:
I don't think that anyone in that relationship has any grounds to accuse others of being childish :P lovely little bit as per usual.
Comments from author:
You make a very good point . . . *grins*

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Acting Like Little Kids" from cryefourme
Review:
LOL HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. haaaaaaaaaaa that is funny PUSSY AM NOT HAHAHAHAH
Comments from author:
That's a classic F&F line and I could so hear the "am not" be said afterwards. ^_^

So very glad you liked it. *grins*

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Acting Like Little Kids" from silvergaurd
Review:
when was there a sex scene?
Comments from author:
It was supposed to be in chapter twenty-seven, but I took it out, because I wanted to keep my maximum rating of FR18. The scene (well, full-blown story now) has been put in the "Extras" series, has a FR21 rating and is called "A Roll in the Dirt".
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Defying Death" from cryefourme
Review:
PPPPPPPBBBBBBBIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTT There you go.
Comments from author:
Raspberries, raspberries, . . . What do to with reviews like this? LOL
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Defying Death" from lothlorien
Review:
Adorable. It's good to have a way to relax after surviving mortal peril :P And tickling really is suspiciously like sex... hm hm hm...
Comments from author:
Tickling really does seem an awful lot like sex, doesn't it? Especially when I put it like this . . . *grins*

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Defying Death" from silvergaurd
Review:
Very amusing, can't wait to see more.
Comments from author:
I'm very glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing. *grins*
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Manly Construction Type Man" from sciphy
Review:
i can so see that conversation.... sorry i have been out of the loop for a while, been sick.
Can't stay on too long, back to sleep, give the others my love!
Comments from author:
Oh, dear, I had been wondering why I didn't see you online anymore. Question answered. I hope you'll feel better soon. Don't worry, I'll post a notice on weird_minds. Just concentrate on getting better and I'll hear from you when you can.

I'm very glad you enjoyed this short conversation. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [sciphy] • Date [21 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Manly Construction Type Man" from lothlorien
Review:
Can you make a story from this? Come on, it could be Xander's coming out story - being forced to prove to Spike that he's all manly like and ending up snogging him like there's no tomorrow... it would be great. Think about it yeah?
Comments from author:
Spike kisses Xander which makes Xander come out of the closet? Hmm, you might be on to something.

Throw in Fred and George who find out that Xander has kissed Spike and Harry and Neville who find out that Spike has kissed Xander and we have a recipe for disaster. Jealous lovers all around . . . ^_^

Well, back to business: maybe I'll write it and maybe I won't. It's all up to the muse, really. *cheeky grin*

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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