Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from EmmyN
I hope you get around to writing more of this story as its very unique.
Review By [EmmyN
] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from trongod
This is a great start, and Really hoping that you pick it back up. Wondering if Mickey will get a wake up call that triggers some, if not all, of his memories of the possible future. Seems a waste if he was sent back - even if a TAD too far - to prevent things, only to have had it erased to the point of vague feelings and hunches....
Review By [trongod
] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from lorwen
Review By [lorwen
] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from Hanzo
♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.♥
Review By [Hanzo
] • Date [7 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from LFW
I like how time adjusted and got better.
How long until the headache returns Xander in Mickey?
Hoping for more
Review By [LFW
] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from joshlamont
Heya! Great story so far, just wanted to point out a few things-
Defiantly - rebelliously; i.e., screw you attitude
Definitely - for certain
They're - they are
Their - that person's (e.g., their car)
There - that place (e.g., go over there)
Review By [joshlamont
] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from eriktheviking
An interesting and well written slant on canon.
Review By [eriktheviking
] • Date [1 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from VillageOrchid
Is Mickey going to wake up the next morning with all of his old memories?
Please get someone else to proof read your story or take the time to read the entire thing out loud! There were a lot of small word errors that interrupted the flow.
Good plotting. With Darla dead now, all sorts of ripples may occur.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from dragonwarlord
cool start, im looking forward to the next chapter! li
Review By [dragonwarlord
] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Bronze
When I can look at the words and see the pictures in my head I know I am truly into and enjoying what I am reading.
Imaginative; has me wondering if Xander is truly gone or if he's just gone to sleep...hmmmm...completely integrated?
Looking forward to more.
Thanks for sharing
Review By [Bronze
] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from stonewar
great start...more please
Review By [stonewar
] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Gideon
Nice work - you have avoided the problem of having an all-knowing future!Xander by wiping his memory which means he won't always know exactly what is going to happen or what should be changed and it keeps the story interesting :)
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [27 Sep 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Neverwillmini
At some point, will he/they start wondering about paradoxes? He's already changed so much about 'himself' (his twin now), that what happens to the timeline that caused him to be sent back? And even if he hadn't, he was planning on changing events so they would never get to the point that caused the need to send him back in the first place (I sometime hate temporal mechanics).
That being said, I like the changes to his family/life so far. It's great that he has a twin, it's great that his father is gone, and it's great that Jessica learned to stand on her own two feet.
Review By [Neverwillmini
] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from CPTSkip
Lol! I love the 'Mickey'. And nice to see 'Mickey' actually get some combat training this time around. I just hope his memories come back when he runs into Buffy this time. But where is Cordy? I would think they wouldn't be such total enemies what with him being a fighter and, not to mention, not having Tony for a father would make him a cooler kid since I am sure he still has the 'Original Xander' sense of humor. I also hope he can befriend Jonathan more to bring him in as a real Scooby. And possibly Marcia and Amy, also. Great story so far.
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Not Rated