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Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Soooo, why did you stop? This is a great beginning, but a lot more needs to be written.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [31 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from EmmyN
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Hello
I hope you get around to writing more of this story as its very unique.
Emmy
Review By [EmmyN] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from trongod
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This is a great start, and Really hoping that you pick it back up. Wondering if Mickey will get a wake up call that triggers some, if not all, of his memories of the possible future. Seems a waste if he was sent back - even if a TAD too far - to prevent things, only to have had it erased to the point of vague feelings and hunches....
Review By [trongod] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from lorwen
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needs more...
Review By [lorwen] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from Hanzo
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♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.♥
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [7 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from LFW
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Great start.
I like how time adjusted and got better.
How long until the headache returns Xander in Mickey?
Hoping for more
Review By [LFW] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from joshlamont
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Heya! Great story so far, just wanted to point out a few things-

Defiantly - rebelliously; i.e., screw you attitude
Definitely - for certain

They're - they are
Their - that person's (e.g., their car)
There - that place (e.g., go over there)
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from eriktheviking
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An interesting and well written slant on canon.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from Bobboky
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nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from VillageOrchid
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Is Mickey going to wake up the next morning with all of his old memories?
Please get someone else to proof read your story or take the time to read the entire thing out loud! There were a lot of small word errors that interrupted the flow.
Good plotting. With Darla dead now, all sorts of ripples may occur.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from dragonwarlord
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cool start, im looking forward to the next chapter! li
Review By [dragonwarlord] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Bronze
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When I can look at the words and see the pictures in my head I know I am truly into and enjoying what I am reading.
Imaginative; has me wondering if Xander is truly gone or if he's just gone to sleep...hmmmm...completely integrated?

Looking forward to more.
Thanks for sharing
Bronze
Review By [Bronze] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from stonewar
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great start...more please
Review By [stonewar] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Gideon
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Nice work - you have avoided the problem of having an all-knowing future!Xander by wiping his memory which means he won't always know exactly what is going to happen or what should be changed and it keeps the story interesting :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Sep 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Neverwillmini
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At some point, will he/they start wondering about paradoxes? He's already changed so much about 'himself' (his twin now), that what happens to the timeline that caused him to be sent back? And even if he hadn't, he was planning on changing events so they would never get to the point that caused the need to send him back in the first place (I sometime hate temporal mechanics).

That being said, I like the changes to his family/life so far. It's great that he has a twin, it's great that his father is gone, and it's great that Jessica learned to stand on her own two feet.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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