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Review of chapter "Blind Spot" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
This is cool.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [18 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blind Spot" from ChiVayne
Review:
Very powerful chapter. Good job.
Comments from author:
I've been going for a bigger picture with this story. I had originally planned to start the story several days after this chapters events, but I just felt I needed something more first.

Thank you for the review and compliments.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blind Spot" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blind Spot" from XanderLuvsAll
Review:
Great story. Can't wait to read more
Comments from author:
I'm hoping to update again sometime later this month. Thank you for the review.
Review By [XanderLuvsAll] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That time in Africa..." from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and heartrending story setter. Two points that I noticed were "and sometimes the brakes" seemed an incomplete sentence and also the 5.56mm execution shot as AK-47's are 7.62mm unless he had picked up an M-16 or something.
Comments from author:
This was a little rougher then I expected it to be. Since I had Xander using a Type 56, I got 5.56 stuck in my head. That's definitely an annoying typo.

Thanks for the review, and the fix.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That time in Africa..." from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That time in Africa..." from grd
Review:
Outstanding story. Sadly in RL no Xander comes to save young girls when people really do these things. Would have been better if it was a ritual sacrifice but it is not. Ignorance and stupidity. Well done. Shooting them was one way for Xan to hopefully end one generation from passing it on to another.
Comments from author:
It's definitely one of the nastiest, most vicious things you could do to another person. I could have made a generic sacrifice to a demon, but I thought it was more important that people realize this practice still happens there.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [grd] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That time in Africa..." from Tjack
Review:
Good story, harsh but real.
Comments from author:
It's unfortunate that part isn't total fiction, more of a revenge fantasy if anything.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That time in Africa..." from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
AW! Great.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That time in Africa..." from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent start. I'm sorry you are on hiatus with Headhunters, but it is better to do a good job slowly than a half-assed job quickly. I thought you captured the feel of some parts of today's Africa quite well. The sad thing is there are part of each continent on Earth today that are nearly as hellish as any hell on BtVS. I look forward to more of your story.
Comments from author:
I think the problem with Headhunters, was that I simply spent all my time solely on it. Now that I'm splitting my time between several projects, I think I can get my muse back.

Africa can be a very nasty place. I tried to show that, without making all it's inhabitants looking like a bunch of wild-eyed savages, which unfortunately, I've seen others do. I believe realism, no matter how disturbing, is most important.

I'm happy you liked it, and thanks for the review.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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