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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Lyaksandra
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Looking forward to more of this. Your writing is very good, I just found some parts that seemed to drag more than necessary, but that's probably just me, since I'm not a very patient person.
Review By [Lyaksandra] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from khaos
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I wonder how you rate Cameron's combat effectiveness in ME-verse.
Personally, in a fist fight, I'd give her a 50/50 chance to win against 3/4 trained (but non biotic) krogans
With equal equipment, in a gun fight, I'd give her a 75/25 win against most spectres, including Tela Vasir.

Against a squad of Asari commando, Shepard and Liara, not a chance in chance in hell.

I hope to see a new chapter soon, good job so far.
Review By [khaos] • Date [22 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bushido
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So if Alexis is the one pushing you to write a Mass Effect story, does that mean we'll see more than just a few chapters before you're attacked by another plot bunny?
Review By [Bushido] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Markelo
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Pretty good, Joe. I still want Cameron to look human. Just how are you going to make her look human?
Review By [Markelo] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CrystalBlaze
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For Cameron to get THAT line back in her face.. absolutely lovely.

God knows John got ruthless toward the end--he had to. I'm surprised at the outright backstab on the then Shadow Broker, however, unless he feared Cameron's analysis would result in Skynet being reborn in the greater Galaxy..
Comments from author:
It's a combination of desperation and arrogance. Earth was seriously fucked up and so the possibility of alien tech to restore it or alien ship tech to facilitate an evacuation of his chosen ones was enough to push him to do what he did. He also overestimated Cameron's combat effectiveness when it came to the residents of the galaxy; he was betting that putting them on an even footing would allow her to come out on top (as opposed to Skynet's forces, who never had ME tech weaponry) but that didn't last long thanks to hack attacks and krogans.

Scary thought: kroganators.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bushido
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So did Alexis blow up the Collector Base or just fry the Collectors? In the first chapter you mentioned that they had separated from Cerberus and had to figure out how to repair the ship without Cerberus' resources which implies the ending where the base blew up and Shepard told the Illusive Man where to shove it, but in the second chapter Alexis mentioned hiding in the Collector base to get away from Liara which implies the other ending where Shepard spares the base and still works with the Illusive Man.
Comments from author:
Or C: she used the "clear 'em all out" option AND told the Illusive Man to go fuck himself.
Review By [Bushido] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from UncleKai
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Very nice.

Big plus for writing it in a way that one can understand it with only little knowledge of the Mass Effect Universe (Wikipedia helps though).
Comments from author:
I'm trying. I know that not everyone owns a XBox 360.
Review By [UncleKai] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Arekanderu
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Awesome! Cam is back. More please :)
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Robby
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Interesting story so far, looking forward to more.
Review By [Robby] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from annararen
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Looks promising :)
Review By [annararen] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bushido
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I've been wondering when we'd see a Mass Effect story from you since you changed your Forum Avatar to Liara. I'm looking forward to seeing just where you go with it. Did you happen to look at the surveilance videos on the Shadow Broker's ship? Several of them are amusing, but two of them could have potential impact on future plots. One video shows David Anderson meeting with a Cerberus Operative, the other confirms that the Asari Matriarch bartender on Ilium (Matriarch Etheeta) is Liara's "father." It's relatively obvious if you hear certain dialogue from Liara in the first game and talk to Etheeta in ME2 ("... even had a Pureblood daughter. I was the Father. It didn't work out.")

For this version of Shepard, how did some of the major plot points turn out? Was the Rachni queen spared? Did Wrex survive Virmire? Did Ashley or Kaiden die on Virmire? Did the Alliance save the Council? Was Tali exiled from the Flotilla? Did Alexis order Legion to convert or destroy the Heretics? Did Alexis save the Collector base or did she destroy it and simultaneously tell The Illusive Man where to shove it?

I like the interplay between Kasumi and Alexis. Kasumi was probably my favorite new character in Mass Effect 2 aside from Mordin and I really hope she gets more screen-time in ME3.

Now that you have a 360, what other games do you think you might get into that might show up in your fanfiction eventually? I'd particularly like to see where your unique perspective would go with the Bioshock series. (I know you haven't played it yet judging by the XboxLive gamercard in your forum sig)
Comments from author:
I know I'm getting the two BioShock games soon and so I might do something there. Played the Halo franchise both on my box and my sister's; not impressed and so I doubt I'll be joining the ranks of the Halohumpers and doing Xander-is-Master-Chief YAHFs or anything. Dragon Age seems likely, since my sister loves that came too. I'll prolly grab the inevitable Platinum copy of it that I'm sure will come out just before DA2 to stir up interest.
Review By [Bushido] • Date [30 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SnakeFox
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Loved it. I mean, my Shepard was a guy, and a paragon, but still, this was pretty awesome. Very well written, the characters were captured really well, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this ^_^
Comments from author:
Same here but this is Alexis and her playthrough (which is about 66/33 Renegade/Paragon) so I'm doing things her way. There are some physical alterations (longer hair, body shape, etc.) and then the closer friendship between Alexis and Kasumi is all me but a lot fits the game just to keep things close so I can use the material of ME3 if I want.
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DCG
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Well thats a rather interesting, and scary, Start.
Comments from author:
EDI's a scary bitch...
Review By [DCG] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Arekanderu
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I am completely and utterly lost as far as Mass Effect is concerned but it seems very interesting. Is Cameron going to be in this?
Comments from author:
She is but not by any method involving time travel or the general hinkiness of the Terminator-verse that we regularly see used to bridge it with a crossover property.
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Roth
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Bwahahhaha. Great start. I love the way Alexis interacts with her crew. I'm most of the way through Mass Effect 2, so I've run into a couple of spoilers, but frankly that's my own fault. I do have to say that I've played the Shadow Broker scenario and playing a female Shepard, and I had no problem reconnecting with Liara... not that she interacts much when you visit the base. So I'm not sure when EA pulled the plug on the lesbian relationships.

I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
It might also vary depending on when you did it; I know from Lexi and I doing it at different points that if you do it pre-finale versus post-finale, there are some differences to the DLC.
Review By [Roth] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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