Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Whoever is doing this, is starting to upset the two leaders. And this something you do NOT want to happen! Might be time to contact Red and Tara, along with Angel and his crew and get people doing the research and fast. Someone is playing games with these assassination attempts and they are going to pay. OH they are going to pay!
Review By [Harry
] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
never a moment of peace for the two groups... but at least now they know that someone is after them ^_^
Review By [serenityselena
] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eureka
OK who is trying to kill my guys?
Review By [Eureka
] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
A well written suspense builder.
Also, in one section Cho said "We may have an untrustworthy person in our mists back home", mists should be midst.
Comments from author:
tx for pointing that out. fixed now. (Hawklan)
Review By [eriktheviking
] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]