Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
never a moment of peace for the two groups... but at least now they know that someone is after them ^_^
Review By [serenityselena
] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eureka
OK who is trying to kill my guys?
Review By [Eureka
] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
A well written suspense builder.
Also, in one section Cho said "We may have an untrustworthy person in our mists back home", mists should be midst.
Comments from author:
tx for pointing that out. fixed now. (Hawklan)
Review By [eriktheviking
] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]