Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
EurekaReview:
OK who is trying to kill my guys?
Review By [
Eureka] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
erikthevikingReview:
A well written suspense builder.
Also, in one section Cho said "We may have an untrustworthy person in our mists back home", mists should be midst.
Comments from author:
tx for pointing that out. fixed now. (Hawklan)
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]