**I first read this on FF.net. I'm putting the review I left this on there here, too. :D **
Wow. This is a wonderful look into Joyce's mind. I love that right before she dies, she's thinking of her children, all of her children.
Jenny showing up was great, and I loved her line about Giles.
The fact that Joyce is about to die and everything looks so peaceful is ironic. That fact she comments on that makes it awesome writing on your part.
The paragraph on which Joyce thinks about what she really left Buffy and Dawn is so true.
Wonderful job, as always.
Comments from author:
I love you and I love this review and I thank you so much for taking the time to place it here! *hugs*
I'm terrible about updating and answering reviews on FF.net because, honestly, it's such an involved process. I'm lazy and have no other good excuse. *hangs head*
Your comments are so kind and reflect exactly what I was trying to accomplish with this story. Thank you for telling me it wasn't in vain. :)
Review By [SongBirdie] • Date [30 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This was beautiful and sad and yet somehow satisfying, too.
Comments from author:
Honestly, that's how I felt writing it, too.
Joyce's death was just so...devastating to me, even though I knew via spoilers that it was coming. It was just so stark and final and horrible. I always hated the thought that she was alone when it happened, and if she was cognizant *as* it happened, and what she might have thought about, so I decided to write this. I'm just so happy other people are interested in it and feel I managed to do her some small measure of justice.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [30 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Oh, wow, that was so beautiful. Thank you so much for posting it. It's so...strangely calming and an amazing addition to the Jossverse fanfiction 'canon'. I loved every word.
Comments from author:
What an amazing compliment! Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I sincerely appreciate it! :)
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [30 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Beautiful. I loved your characterization of Joyce. I actually teared up near the end, there. :)
Comments from author:
Gosh, thank you! I always loved Joyce, and while "The Body" is one of my favorite episodes, it always made me very sad that such a great lady passed away by herself. I'm so pleased you thought I did right by her in this. :)
Review By [Waverly] • Date [30 Sep 10] • Not Rated