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Review of chapter "21" from fourmenandanelephant
Great backstory. Now we just need Willow to show up as Death, Oz as God and Xander as Oblivion at the end (whatever that might be) to give BTVS a far more logical storyline path especially towards the end and add the sort of humor that Supernatural is known for... (IE: Dean's we hunt monsters rant.) In a more serious non ironic note, this is the best uncompleted story on the entire website. PLEASE FINISH.
Review By [fourmenandanelephant] • Date [11 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from ShyBob
This. Is. EPIC. The backstory on Buffy, Dawn, and Faith is well crafted, and they dovetail nicely into the SPNverse. You've done a good job ratcheting up the tension for the final battle. I'm really fired up to see how Faith plays her hand. HOW WILL IT END???
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [19 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "21" from imokit
Wow! Brilliant!
Review By [imokit] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "21" from Morgoes
Really enjoyed this so far, so different from other fanfics in that the language you use is so evocative! Really hoping there's an update winging its way round your noggin! Thanks for writing :o)
Review By [Morgoes] • Date [13 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from Callista
I like this story, and I'm very curious about the plan the girls obviously have...
Review By [Callista] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from eset
I love Azreal so much. Can't wait to see the introduction of the Harvilles to this merry band. Also, how will Buffy react to Azreal--glad to have another ally, or not? And when will Dawn tell the others about Raphael? How will Cas take it? How will Cas deal with Az?

More pls!
Review By [eset] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from yuiop
Review By [yuiop] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "21" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Well, hellooooo update!

I got very excited when I saw this. I take it, due to feeling not-so-good, you are just laying in bed with your laptop?

She hadn't lost.

Funny that she doesn’t feel like she’s won anything either.-------------- Poor Dawnie :( Having your big bro come to kill you would really suck.

awn looks at him then, the quietly determined look in his eyes- the one that says ‘you better know what you’re doing girly, bringing in a murderer into my house.’ She likes him, his quiet, his determination and his strength- but Dawn knows that if push comes to shove, Bobby’s not one of the major players in what’s coming. And she also knows that her brother’s very well aware of this. That’s probably the only reason why he still hasn’t leveled the house.------ I really like this description of Bobby, tis perfect, and the lil background info on why Luci never blew up his house like the big bad wolf.

is sharp, angles hidden in shadows like a cubist painting. ------- nice description.

“Well,” Azrael, the angel of death and second in command of Hell’s armies says reasonably, “he couldn’t have told them the truth over the phone, could he?” He makes a face. “That would have been insensitive.”---------haha I really like this dude :)

The circles under his eyes as he leans forward are darker, more protruding- like vicious swipes of ink beneath his brows, like he had gotten into multiple fights and just never healed.--------- you’re so good with descriptions! That’s an area that I terribly need to improve upon. I have to say, I’m a bit jealous ;)

“Are you going to help them?” Lucifer looks at her through his lashes, a falsely coy gesture that belies the truth of the creature beneath. “Or me?”

And that, that makes Faith laugh- genuinely, intensely. She remembers this coyness of his, this false modesty that had never really suited his full power.--------------haha. I can just see him doing this (god I love Mark Pellegrino!)

“We need him,” Faith shrugs, “you know that.”---- Who do they need?????????!!!!!!!!!!

Grrr, I really want to know what this plan is!!!

And I’m excited about Crowley in the next chapter. Gods, I love him :D

Great chapter luv! I hope you feel back to 100% soon!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1" from (Past Donor)zima
Love the art work for this fic.
Review By [(Past Donor)zima] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from HananeELmokkadem
I loved it!!
I'm completely in love with it. You are one hell of a writer!
The why you write their love for each other is beautiful.
I can't wait to see what the girls are planning, it's gotta be awesome.
Please update soon??
xxx Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [3 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from eset
Great story.

i have to admit I was ambivalent on the first few chapters--too much disjointed exposition, not enough plot or dialogue. But once you got into the story itself it's been non-stop fabulous.

I especially loved the most recent Dawn sections: Dawn's confrontation with Azrael, Raphael's attack, and then Azrael summoning Lucifer (even when he was summoning I didn't expect it to be the Morningstar himself). And the revelation of Azrael's rank in Hell--and Adam's reactions which were absolutely priceless.

I also love how Cas isn't 100% positive how to act around them all the time.

What did Cas mean when he said they "[weren't] exactly angels" back in the motel? Where's Dawn's Grace hiding at? When did Michael et al realize the three were back in this dimension?--Raphael didn't seem surprised to run into Dawn in the sewers. What was Lucifer's relationship with the key before he fell?--there seemed to be some pretty strong big brother affection going on there. What's Gabriel up to? Did Lucifer go straight from saving Dawn to talking with Faith and, if so, will he tell Faith what happened? How's Bobby going to react to a fallen angel in his house? How's Buffy going to react when she gets home, or Balthazar if she brings him with her? I can't imagine those two would get along very well at all. How will the boys feel about letting three chicks fight their battles for them?

I can't wait to see where you take this. More please?
Review By [eset] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Great chapter. Glad to see an update, even if wasn't the story I was hoping for to be updated. Kudos on the chapter.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from LeaFairy
Oh, this was just lovely!!! I am SO happy to see an update to this wonderfully awesome story of yours!!! YAY!!!!!

The Faith (Raguel)/Lucifer scene was spectacular! I always LOVE their scenes (they're honestly my favorites...), and the one in this chapter was no different. I especially loved the ending part with them holding hands and Faith's declaration of not letting anyone destroy Lucifer. *sigh* Simply incredible. I also really like how you write your Lucifer - he's so freaking bitter and angry - it (he) fits Faith and her personality rather perfectly.

I'm still very curious as to what the girls big plan is, cause I truly have NO idea of how they can get everyone (mostly Lucifer and the Winchesters) to get along. I can't wait to find out though...!

Awesome news about Buffy finally getting her Grace! Woohoo! I loved the whole part (past and present) between her and Balthazar. I love all their scenes together too, just not as much as the Faith/Lucifer ones :-) You got me curious too as to why Faith doesn't want her full Grace back? Why is she fighting/running around with only half her Grace? Hmm...

Anyhoo, this was an utterly fabulous chapter! Thank you SO much for updating hun!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from clockworkorange
Yay, Buffy's found her Grace!

I always love when Buffy, Faith, and Dawn interact with the other angels but the Faith-Lucifer and Buffy-Balthazar interactions are probably my favorite ones to read. So, double yay!

I'm really looking forward to Lucifer's confrontation with the Winchesters. I'm definitely curious about what Faith will end up doing when it goes down.
Review By [clockworkorange] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Numfar, do the Joyous Dance of Updates!

*Numfars performs the Joyous Dance of Updates*

...I love, love, loooooooooooooooooove that you updated this! Goodness, you certainly are being a good girl when it comes to updates, aren't you? ;D

Bal's love for Remiel/Buffy is wondrous. Eeeee, I love them.

The Raguel/Faith and Lucifer moments always make my heart sing. Seriously, I love this story. One of my favorites in the world of fanfic. I cannot wait for more!
Comments from author:
Shock and awe, I'm going for scare tactics now.

Oh Joss, you may have gone crazy with S8 and you may sometimes turn into the world's biggest douche- but almost everything can be forgiven just for Numfar.

I'm glad you love them, they're my faves too.

'Abandon All Hope' is next.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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