Review of chapter "21" from imokit
Review By [imokit
] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "21" from Morgoes
Really enjoyed this so far, so different from other fanfics in that the language you use is so evocative! Really hoping there's an update winging its way round your noggin! Thanks for writing :o)
Review By [Morgoes
] • Date [13 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from Callista
I like this story, and I'm very curious about the plan the girls obviously have...
Review By [Callista
] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from eset
I love Azreal so much. Can't wait to see the introduction of the Harvilles to this merry band. Also, how will Buffy react to Azreal--glad to have another ally, or not? And when will Dawn tell the others about Raphael? How will Cas take it? How will Cas deal with Az?
Review By [eset
] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from yuiop
Review By [yuiop
] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "21" from Luna
Well, hellooooo update!
I got very excited when I saw this. I take it, due to feeling not-so-good, you are just laying in bed with your laptop?
She hadn't lost.
Funny that she doesn’t feel like she’s won anything either.-------------- Poor Dawnie :( Having your big bro come to kill you would really suck.
awn looks at him then, the quietly determined look in his eyes- the one that says ‘you better know what you’re doing girly, bringing in a murderer into my house.’ She likes him, his quiet, his determination and his strength- but Dawn knows that if push comes to shove, Bobby’s not one of the major players in what’s coming. And she also knows that her brother’s very well aware of this. That’s probably the only reason why he still hasn’t leveled the house.------ I really like this description of Bobby, tis perfect, and the lil background info on why Luci never blew up his house like the big bad wolf.
is sharp, angles hidden in shadows like a cubist painting. ------- nice description.
“Well,” Azrael, the angel of death and second in command of Hell’s armies says reasonably, “he couldn’t have told them the truth over the phone, could he?” He makes a face. “That would have been insensitive.”---------haha I really like this dude :)
The circles under his eyes as he leans forward are darker, more protruding- like vicious swipes of ink beneath his brows, like he had gotten into multiple fights and just never healed.--------- you’re so good with descriptions! That’s an area that I terribly need to improve upon. I have to say, I’m a bit jealous ;)
“Are you going to help them?” Lucifer looks at her through his lashes, a falsely coy gesture that belies the truth of the creature beneath. “Or me?”
And that, that makes Faith laugh- genuinely, intensely. She remembers this coyness of his, this false modesty that had never really suited his full power.--------------haha. I can just see him doing this (god I love Mark Pellegrino!)
“We need him,” Faith shrugs, “you know that.”---- Who do they need?????????!!!!!!!!!!
Grrr, I really want to know what this plan is!!!
And I’m excited about Crowley in the next chapter. Gods, I love him :D
Great chapter luv! I hope you feel back to 100% soon!!
Review By [Luna
] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1" from zima
Love the art work for this fic.
Review By [zima
] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from HananeELmokkadem
I loved it!!
I'm completely in love with it. You are one hell of a writer!
The why you write their love for each other is beautiful.
I can't wait to see what the girls are planning, it's gotta be awesome.
Please update soon??
Review By [HananeELmokkadem
] • Date [3 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from eset
i have to admit I was ambivalent on the first few chapters--too much disjointed exposition, not enough plot or dialogue. But once you got into the story itself it's been non-stop fabulous.
I especially loved the most recent Dawn sections: Dawn's confrontation with Azrael, Raphael's attack, and then Azrael summoning Lucifer (even when he was summoning I didn't expect it to be the Morningstar himself). And the revelation of Azrael's rank in Hell--and Adam's reactions which were absolutely priceless.
I also love how Cas isn't 100% positive how to act around them all the time.
What did Cas mean when he said they "[weren't] exactly angels" back in the motel? Where's Dawn's Grace hiding at? When did Michael et al realize the three were back in this dimension?--Raphael didn't seem surprised to run into Dawn in the sewers. What was Lucifer's relationship with the key before he fell?--there seemed to be some pretty strong big brother affection going on there. What's Gabriel up to? Did Lucifer go straight from saving Dawn to talking with Faith and, if so, will he tell Faith what happened? How's Bobby going to react to a fallen angel in his house? How's Buffy going to react when she gets home, or Balthazar if she brings him with her? I can't imagine those two would get along very well at all. How will the boys feel about letting three chicks fight their battles for them?
I can't wait to see where you take this. More please?
Review By [eset
] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from AerynSpeedleCaine
Great chapter. Glad to see an update, even if wasn't the story I was hoping for to be updated. Kudos on the chapter.
Review By [AerynSpeedleCaine
] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from LeaFairy
Oh, this was just lovely!!! I am SO happy to see an update to this wonderfully awesome story of yours!!! YAY!!!!!
The Faith (Raguel)/Lucifer scene was spectacular! I always LOVE their scenes (they're honestly my favorites...), and the one in this chapter was no different. I especially loved the ending part with them holding hands and Faith's declaration of not letting anyone destroy Lucifer. *sigh* Simply incredible. I also really like how you write your Lucifer - he's so freaking bitter and angry - it (he) fits Faith and her personality rather perfectly.
I'm still very curious as to what the girls big plan is, cause I truly have NO idea of how they can get everyone (mostly Lucifer and the Winchesters) to get along. I can't wait to find out though...!
Awesome news about Buffy finally getting her Grace! Woohoo! I loved the whole part (past and present) between her and Balthazar. I love all their scenes together too, just not as much as the Faith/Lucifer ones :-) You got me curious too as to why Faith doesn't want her full Grace back? Why is she fighting/running around with only half her Grace? Hmm...
Anyhoo, this was an utterly fabulous chapter! Thank you SO much for updating hun!!
Review By [LeaFairy
] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from clockworkorange
Yay, Buffy's found her Grace!
I always love when Buffy, Faith, and Dawn interact with the other angels but the Faith-Lucifer and Buffy-Balthazar interactions are probably my favorite ones to read. So, double yay!
I'm really looking forward to Lucifer's confrontation with the Winchesters. I'm definitely curious about what Faith will end up doing when it goes down.
Review By [clockworkorange
] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from Luna
Numfar, do the Joyous Dance of Updates!
*Numfars performs the Joyous Dance of Updates*
...I love, love, loooooooooooooooooove that you updated this! Goodness, you certainly are being a good girl when it comes to updates, aren't you? ;D
Bal's love for Remiel/Buffy is wondrous. Eeeee, I love them.
The Raguel/Faith and Lucifer moments always make my heart sing. Seriously, I love this story. One of my favorites in the world of fanfic. I cannot wait for more!
Comments from author:
Shock and awe, I'm going for scare tactics now.
Oh Joss, you may have gone crazy with S8 and you may sometimes turn into the world's biggest douche- but almost everything can be forgiven just for Numfar.
I'm glad you love them, they're my faves too.
'Abandon All Hope' is next.
Review By [Luna
] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guest" from LeaFairy
So, I finally had a chance to catch up on all the chapters I missed (which was like 4, I think...), and damn, this story of yours keeps getting better and better! Then whole thing is absolutely brilliant and the imagery and your complex characters are simply breathtaking.
One of my favorite parts was with Dawn, Azrael and Lucifer. Azrael protecting Dawn from Raphael and almost getting killed because of it (I so thought he was dead!) was a freaking great twist! And then Lucifer coming in to save both of them by killing Raphael himself... just WOW! Definitely didn’t see any of that happening! I really loved all Dawn’s interactions with Lucifer and Azrael. The bitter-sweetness, the longing, the hurt and just the plain love... Gosh, it’s oh so good! I also loved how you showed how conflicted Dawn felt to be around her brothers (especially Lucifer). And then her conflicted reaction to Raphael’s death – being completely devastated, the overwhelming grief she felt for someone who just tried to kill her, but who was still her brother - someone she still loved very much. *sniffle* Fantastic job hun!
I *adored* them calling her “little tree” as well – It’s such a lovely nickname! Also the flashback with Ophriel and her first meeting with the rest of her brothers was really sweet.
The part with Azrael and Dawn teasing dear Luci because he was flustered by Dawn’s gratitude - plus her kissing and hugging him - It was just too wonderful for words :-) Aww! I absolutely LOVED it to bits!
I’m really liking the Buffy/Balthazar parts as well. I love how they interact together – especially the teasing which is seriously funny, but also with how comfortable they are together. It actually kinda seems like each other girl has their own angel who they are most comfortable with... Faith-Lucifer, Buffy-Balthazar and well Dawn has two, Dawn-Azrael and Dawn-Gabriel. Hmm. I’m probably just seeing things =)
Castiel’s flashback about Raguel and Lucifer was very interesting too. So there was gossip from all (some) angels all those years ago about how close Lucifer and Raguel were? Very interesting indeed – especially the part with Lucifer putting Raguel before their Father. I wonder what that means for now, and how it will affect the war?
I’m also *really* curious to find out how Dean and Sam will react to Azrael (the guy who killed their mother and father) casually showing up with Dawn? I can just imagine the drama! *grins* Loved Adam’s reaction to him – His freak-out was funny, plus realistic and I especially loved the part with Dawn --- “See?” Dawn points to the guy with a helpful smile, “I told you that I didn’t bring Lucifer to Bobby’s. I’d never do that,” she finishes and beams, as if it’s a great accomplishment- not bringing the king of darkness to an elderly hunter’s home. --- *giggles* I truly adore the humor you bring out. It’s a true gift I swear!
Anyway, thank you bunches for this story – I’ve seriously enjoyed every minute of it and I’m super sorry for taking so long to read/review your latest updates! Now that I’ve caught up though, I can’t wait to read more - whenever you can obviously, there’s no rush!!
Review By [LeaFairy
] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Guest" from Drix
I finally delved into this and OH MY GOD!!!!!! What an amazing story. I have to say you have me on the verge of tears with the visceral relationships between the girls and their brothers. I'm so heartbroken for Dawn seeing Raphael dying. Please tell me that you will continue soon.
Review By [Drix
] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]