Review of chapter "How it ended, and how it began." from Gideon
Fun, Fun, Fun. I can imagine Buffy having a lot of fun with a bit of downtime. And she wouldn't be so short!
Of course we all know that Buffy will get bored with no slaying to do and that can only lead to interesting times in the new universe. I can't wait to see it !
PS. I think that should be "Are" in the first bit to match "limbs" when you say "(Is human limbs supposed to bend that way?)"
Comments from author:
Yeah, she will... then she gets bored, and dragged (more like she pushes her self) into running moonshine... And yes, I'm going to make her taller. At least half-a-foot. That'll be interesting.
As this is the first part in a rather long series, there'll be plenty of slaying. I don't want to give to much away, but since it's a multi-cross, well... you can be certain that there's aliens involved.
PSR: Nope, it's completely like I meant it to be. Since it's Buffy's thoughts, and we all know how good her astounding grammar is, well, I can't really make it grammatically correct, now can I?
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [3 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How it ended, and how it began." from Azure
Good start(: I especially enjoyed B's thoughts during the fight. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Review By [Azure
] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Not Rated