Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ava
I see Spike! You snuck him into the corner. :)
I think you did a great job capturing the essence of your story. Of course it is your story so that's probably a given, but still. Nice job.
Review By [Ava
] • Date [3 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kiwikatipo
Oh pretty! I'm not sure if the red splashes are meant to be blood though. There's a bit much I think, if it is.
Review By [Kiwikatipo
] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Not Rated