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Review of chapter "My Sweet Prince" from kattz
I just realize that i didn't leave a review for this. I love daddy Jean Claude! He would definitely be overprotective of his son. I pity anyone who goes after Connor.
Comments from author:
I do pity them too. But I can imagine Connor driving him up the wall.
Review By [kattz] • Date [24 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "My Sweet Prince" from londeaux
Interesting. Too bad it was a one shot story.

What would make a good story line is when Angel comes looking for his son, and is not a happy camper.

Especially if Angelus is considered the second scariest vampire to walk the earth.
Review By [londeaux] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "My Sweet Prince" from Gloriana
Good prose, but I was left feeling a little underwhelmed. You start with a premise, but you don't appear to have taken it anywhere. I really like it when a story brings me in with the characters and lets me feel part of it; with this I felt like an outsider looking in, a bit like I was reading a biography. A better way to do this story could be to focus on one of the parts of this new verse and really develop it. Show us exactly how the characters are feeling and stir up conflict with new events that really challenge and develop them.
Comments from author:
Thank you- I understand what you mean. I will be hopefully venturing into this if time permits- I didn't want to delve in too deep for my first venture in the AB world. I did want it as an outside POV throughout but I know what you mean about wanting to feel part of it. I plan to write a second oneshot which will take place after this a few years later when Connor and Jesse are both teens.
Review By [Gloriana] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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