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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bear
Review:
Nice! More please
Review By [Bear] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from TrinityLayne
Review:
Is it bad that I am looking forward to Willow beating the snot outa Hiyori? lol
Am really enjoying the story. I can't wait to read more. ^o^
Review By [TrinityLayne] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from calikocat
Review:
O.O Dude! Holy Crap! And YES you updated! Absolutely loved your back-story and explanation! Again, yay updates! XD
Review By [calikocat] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from borgrabbit
Review:
Say it thrice with haiku:

Dharma kept distant
Will never fall or winter
Child undying

•☺•☻•☺•☻•☺•☻•☺•☻•☺•☻•

So Willow is the daughter of the Shadow King. It appears that having the sun goddess for her blade will encourage her to fight for Justice. Seems the Spirit King needs chastening and, especially, the guy who stabbed her, as well.

Great Story‼
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [27 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from calikocat
Review:
Hmm, interesting.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [calikocat] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Ben
Review:
Wait a minute...

Did Aizen (or Gin or Tousen) just use Willow's blood to make an Ouken?
Comments from author:
Sorta. I wasn't sure if I had written that too vague or not. Trying to be all mysterious, ooohhh. lol! and I totally suck at it.
Review By [Ben] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Lover
Review:
very nice update, looking forward to more.
Review By [Lover] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Iriai
Review:
Oh, interesting. Though I am a bit concerned that the king (the spirit king?) has been killed already, and that Willow has become so superpowered, even before she really got into the strong magics in canon. It would have been interesting to see her grow and confound people using what little magic she had--like, the underdog, lol. But yeah, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

I get what you're saying about the superpowers. Not to worry though, this was just her initial influx. She'll be moving at a slower pace for a bit. And the confusion about the 'King' dying will be cleared up in the next chapter.
Review By [Iriai] • Date [15 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Erica
Review:
Sweet!! Now all u need is some fan art to match that awesome description you just gave. I wish I was talented enough to do u justice.
Comments from author:
Lol! I know what you mean. I keep seeing it in my head, if only someone would help me?

::sigh's tragically::
Review By [Erica] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Erica
Review:
Sweet!! Now all u need is some fan art to match that awesome description you just gave. I wish I was talented enough to do u justice.
Review By [Erica] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from deathgeonous
Review:
Neat fic here. Gotta little confusing at the ending point of this chapter, but that's ok, still good. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, sorry if it got confusing. I have a bad habit of getting ahead of myself, without explaining important details. Annoying at best, I know.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from fansick
Review:
I happy to see the next chapter is up, this story is continuing to draw me in. I can not wait for the next one.
Comments from author:
Yay! Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [fansick] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Shadohime
Review:
Oh, boy...A Wicca now infused with the powers of a Visored...that's going to rock Urahara's world.

So...has Byakuya taken Rukia already, or do we have to wait for that?

And really, I never thought Willow to be the dumb sort. When you wake up in unfamiliar surroundings, you STAY STILL. Of course, perhaps her drug-addled mind didn't compute that.

Good chapter, and a good story. This is quickly becoming one of my favorites, right alongside angeluscado's Slayer Shinigami and jezerai's Learning to Live. SS is done now, and LtL hasn't been updated in a while, so this story will hopefully fill the void. Please update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you!

LOL! I think I geeked out for 15 minutes when I read your review. I freaking devoured the Learning to Live series and Slayer Shinigami.

And, no, Byakuya hasn't appeared yet with Renji, but that'll be a tinsy bit later.
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from GraysonPaladin
Review:
Well damn, that was one epic chapter. Willow is a Vizard/Shinigami/Witch who is most likely very much pissed at Urahara. Hat-and-Clogs is going to be in so much pain, and Ichigo may help Willow on that matter. Ok that was one of the best gaining the zanpakto scenes I have seen, and certainly better than what I tried in my own stories. Oh and two little nitpicks, they aren't robes they are kimonos (though what the shinigami wear have their own name) and the kimono is held closed by an obi. ~GraysonPaladin, who now understands the title.
Comments from author:
::blushes:: Thank you!

Lol, pissed is a good way to describe it. And good looking out on the obi.
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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