Haiku down the loo:

Confrontational
Canon Buff as one expects
Late summer regrets

Be nice to see one more chapter to cover guy Buffy's reaction.

Ah, this looks good. Fun too. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

So Joyce went as one of Ranma's people along with Cordie and crew.. Does everyone keep their new memories?

Awesome. Thank you. :)

I love this!^_^

Please write more!^_^

It's so good!^_^

Now it feels like we're at the end of the prologue

Pretty damn good.

It had humor and madness. No worries, but I hope that this is continued, or adopted with your permission. From the looks of it, we now have the first (occasionally) male Slayer. That's bound to get a little weird.

:D,

did not really watch Ranma much... just know basics of it, but from what I remember, its all good :D. And, I think, and thirds chapter was really amusing and fun. Oh, and 2nd chapter was good too... too much amusement can't be too healthy :D, so its all good, each story needs a bit of dark in them, right?

Good update

Haiku fu:

Ranma has art too
Backed by Amazon training
Its bless't to be best

This is the first non Xander, Nyannichuan story I've seen. Actually this would be a Nannichuan story, but, whatever. Keep it up, please.

In the Summary: "A case of foot-and-mouth by Xander..."

"foot-and-mouth" is a disease; you meant "foot-in-mouth".

Ha! That is quite a reversal you have going there. Not quite confirmed in the 2nd chapter if anything is sticking around from the night but Buffy will at least have some interesting memories :) I don't expect Buffy will be as pleased to see Xander as he will be to see her. I wonder if she will blame him for her costume choice.

ok what happens next??????????????????????????????????

I rather liked this chapter. Your descriptions of surroundings and inner workings are very detailed. Some perhaps too detailed as you actually wrote like three paragraphs on Twinkies...

Pro: Xander reviewing the memories of the Soldier and finding them not lily-white is something that's sadly lacking in other stories - most of them concentrate only on the good points like the weapons-training.
Con: What I didn't like was how fast he recovered. He only thought about Buffy having Ranma's memories and was ready to laugh again. It cheapens the built-up drama in my eyes.

I don't know exactly where you are going with this. Is it supposed to be comedy (as in Ranma and parts of Buffy) or rather drama (as the memories are rather hardcore-tragedy)? A balance act is rather hard to accomplish. I suggest to stick to one of them or make this tragic chapter some sort of separate story. I'll keep reading, that's for sure.

Thanks for writing,
Just in Jest