I enjoyed the story or as much of it has been written as of yet. It is a interesting crossover with Starcraft, Stargate and Buffy. I do hope that you update the story in the future but do suggest that you look into having someone do a small spelling check on the story, in a few places I spotted mistakes like no instead of not or "pieces es", I believe that was another one. Other than that, it is a well written and logically flowing story, I hope you keep up the good work.
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Review By [named] • Date [12 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Re-reading this for the third time now, it's a great story. I'm hoping you plan to update it soon because I want to see Jack's face when he meets Xander, and know if the X-man will 'infest' Faith or Buffy.
Review By [ReaperCB] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I have really enjoyed reading this story, and I can hardly wait till the next update. By the way is there any progression in regards to the next chapter?
Review By [ladiciusevol] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Not Rated
I really like this story so far. This is my first exposure to Starcraft but I'm a major Stargate fan and have written many fanfics about it before. You have a serious talent for writing. You blend the two stories well and write without too much angst or drama, a style I enjoy reading very much. I'm curious if at some point you plan to have Xander paired romantically with any female characters. Sam would be a great partner for him or perhaps Amy/Egeria. This is a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [stargatefan] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I really enjoy this, since the only real Starcraft/BtVS Xovers I've seen were really crappy ones where Xander lives forever and becomes a Marine or something.
On a lighter note, though, I do have a question. With the whole absorbing thing, and the manipulating his desires to rampage and all, as well as the armour, I think, given that it has been proven possible, thanks to Kerrigan, that the bloodlust could be staved off completely, that the process of cutting off the desire to fight, kill, and assimilate is basically destroyed, it stands to reason that the same sort of Semi-Cerebrate could be maintained, or even grown into his body, which would also help to control his virus spreading enough to almost allow him regular contact with anyone.
So, I say keep up the good work, and update soon, FemXanderForever.
Review By [FemXanderForever] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Really glad you changed this chapter from the original version - it dropped the story for me from 'must read' to 'maybe on a rainy day'. Much better - I would have found it exceptionally hard to identify with Xander at all positively after the original.
Review By [weirdbutgifted] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]