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Review of chapter "Nine" from agnar
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Seems fairly obtuse and careless of Giles, Xander and Egeria that none of them thought the military might notice if the stargate in orbit suddenly vanished. The tech to track objects in orbit is very common knowledge, and it's obvious they'd closely track a big piece of alien technology relating to a recent invasion.
Review By [agnar] • Date [5 Mar 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "1" from agnar
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I gotta call bullshit on your authors note. Angel getting a happy moment only when he gets sex with Buffy doesn't frigging prove he 'truly loves' Buffy. It proves that the orgasm gave him a happy moment.

Sorry but 'one moment of true happiness' shouldn't come about due to having sex, that's fucking shallow as all hell, just like Angel is.

If Angel really loved Buffy, Xander wouldn't have had to force his help with the Master, and Angel wouldn't have hidden that very fact from Buffy either. Liam was a dirtbag man whore in life, Angel is a cowardly dirtbag man whore an ensouled vampire.

He spent around a century angsting and brooding and sucking on rats without doing a damned thing to help anyone. Suddenly when he's told to go help this hot, underage blonde he decides to 'help' and even then it's incredibly half-assed help. He didn't really get hands on until he was forced to in season 1.

Buffy thought she loved Angel, and Angel *may* have thought he loved Buffy, but that was one fucked up, shallow relationship that was bad for both of them and all around them.
Review By [agnar] • Date [5 Mar 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from evilreader
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Incredible story would love to see more of this
Review By [evilreader] • Date [16 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from Fablesrogue
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Are you continuing with this? This is pure gold.

Hope to see more soon.
Review By [Fablesrogue] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from longreachjones
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Very nice story. Here have a link to someone who liked it enough to try and claim it as their own.
http://ficwad.com/story/223099
Review By [longreachjones] • Date [18 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "17" from Delkatar
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Nice story!
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from Spica
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Please DO continue this story sometime? Very different from my own idea that caused me to find this, but very neat with some interesting choices.
Review By [Spica] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from prehensileclaw
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I read some other Zerg fanfic recently and just had to come reread this gem. Good stuff.
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from deamon
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so is xander going to go evil zerg or actually be able to hold himself in check?
Review By [deamon] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "17" from named
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I enjoyed the story or as much of it has been written as of yet. It is a interesting crossover with Starcraft, Stargate and Buffy.
I do hope that you update the story in the future but do suggest that you look into having someone do a small spelling check on the story, in a few places I spotted mistakes like no instead of not or "pieces es", I believe that was another one.
Other than that, it is a well written and logically flowing story, I hope you keep up the good work.

Named
Review By [named] • Date [12 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from prehensileclaw
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Hard to believe it has been a year since this was updated... Still worth the reread though. :)
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from ReaperCB
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Re-reading this for the third time now, it's a great story. I'm hoping you plan to update it soon because I want to see Jack's face when he meets Xander, and know if the X-man will 'infest' Faith or Buffy.
Review By [ReaperCB] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from RoyalTwinFangs
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Hope you update this.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Downery
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If not for the addition of the Powers That Be this story would've been great.
Review By [Downery] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from Alstreim
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Can't wait to read more about Xander's scourge
Review By [Alstreim] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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