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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Nine" from randyzoopurple
Review:
update pleaseeeeeee lol
Comments from author:
I'm stuck on one bloody character! And it's a crucial chapter, so I can't just flab... I'll try... But once I get this chap out I have the next one done... so please be patient!
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [13 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Nine" from kittenpoker
Review:
Just re-read the whole story and love it even more. It would be lovely to read more!!
Comments from author:
Thank You! Yes it's taken a while I'm getting there. I've had a busy 3 months and have just finished a course for a change in career path... so I'll try to update in the next month. :)
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Nine" from randyzoopurple
Review:
so sad but i loved it
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [6 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Nine" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
nicely done. thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Nine" from Lottii
Review:
Love how this is developing.

Cheers
Lottii
Comments from author:
THanks :D
Review By [Lottii] • Date [14 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Nine" from randyzoopurple
Review:
Yes great chap
Comments from author:
Thank you!!!
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Nine" from bradsan
Review:
No way daddy Clay and baby girl Buffy are so alike. Stubborn as hell. You know the strange looks Clay will get when he is shows a proud smile when he will hold or look at his grandchildren and thinks nobody is looking. "LOL"

Oh gosh and what do you think what would happen if somebody tries to hurt Buffy or if she ever cry when he is around. Oh man he can't show anything and in the same time he want to hit the one who makes her cry. He is putting himself in a very difficult position and darn I love it. Hope you will write a situation where it happens.

Did Buffy something about Dawns parents and what will Buffy do with her other family the summers site. Will you reveal how much influence they have and does she tries to contact them. Can't remember if she already did. Oh and what will happen when Han's family will finds out about the twins. They can't do much but they will try and maybe finds out how dangerous that could be. Lets face it Buffy and the twins will be the most protected people in the world with the family and friends they have. Even Dawn will be well protected being Buffy sister and the aunt of the twins.

Can't wait what will happen next. Good job, love it. Oh and Yeah update.
Comments from author:
:DDDD

Well Dawn's stor will be in the other story. It'll be too much for this one.

And I don't want to give too much away... I'll have to kep you guessing! ;)

THanks for the review!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Eight" from SpikesSlayer
Review:
Absolutely LOVE IT!!! Your story inspired me to watch Sons of Anarchy (I had never watched it until I stumbled over your fix). 3 days later, after watching the entire series including the finale of season 5, I re-read "The past comes back" and was amazed at how wonderfully you captured the characters. Plus, its always a thrill when multiple fandoms are blended together and so flawlessly. Awesome Job. Can't wait to read more soon.
Comments from author:
:D Aww I love that you went to watch SOA becasue of me!
It is an awsome show and that ending for Season5 is doing so well with what I was writing!

I have the next chapter written but its not as long as I promised, so I'm going to see if I can add to it. Otherwise I'm just going to post it as it is. :)

So Happy you love it!! :D
Review By [SpikesSlayer] • Date [7 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Eight" from bradsan
Review:
You know you are mean don't ya. Leaving hints about Buffy's medical problems with her birth while Clay is listening but not revealing anything. Darn you have a wicked mind. Glad you use it this way "LOL".

Can't wait for the next chapter. Glad you updated this soon.

edit: did I said mean. You are evil. I have to read it again. A well I think I do the whole story again.
Comments from author:
While the things you picked up is interesting there's somehting else in that chap that hints at where I'm taking one of the characters... A small one, but it's there ;P

Thanks for the review!!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [24 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Eight" from JennRosbury
Review:
Love it and love seeing more SOA/Buffy interaction!
Comments from author:
THank you!!!
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Eight" from randyzoopurple
Review:
I cant wait for them to find out shes their kid.
Comments from author:
Heeheehee I so want to comment. But will give things away ;)
Thanks for the review!!
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Seven" from bradsan
Review:
I read the last 4 chapters again to be sure I missed nothing. Then suddenly Anubis the dog came in. Don't tell me I missed something.

"giggle" go Buffy showing up with Han on the last moment and then falling asleep. It's the best way to avoid questions.

It sucks when you can't use one of your hands especially the one you used the most. I hope all gets better now.

Love it and can't wait for the next chapter.

edit: Ah I found the meeting with Anubis.
Comments from author:
LOL I should've added a note at the end of the chap telling people where to go if they wanted to know where Anubis came from. Oh well

Originally the new chap at Moving forward was the chap I was going to introduce Han, but then this chapter came to be and it just made more sense. I contemplated putting that chapter here in the Past, but it seemed too much, so I decided to add to the Moving Forward.

The next few chapters you aren't going to see many of the Buffy characters, I'm going back to SOA. Things are about to get interesting ;)

Thanks for reading!!!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Seven" from JennRosbury
Review:
LOVE the story cannot wait for more and sorry that the button does not go past 10 cause higher would be better :)
Comments from author:
:D Love it when people loves it!!!

Thanks!
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from vanimi
Review:
You are a very creative writer. When I first came across your story, it really was one of the better SOA crossovers I has read. It actually has some good plot and length. Lately though, there hasn't been really any evidence this is a SOA crossover anymore, no real interation with those characters in 10 chapter (almost 1/3 if your story so far). I really hope you start vbringibg the characters back in because I was really looking forward to some good SOA/Buffy crossover fiction.

Thanks for writing, and keep up with your creative plots though.
Comments from author:
Hey, the Sons characters will be back in a chap or two. I wasn't too sure about posting some of these chapters here, but I did hit a lull a bit back and it's either post these or post nothing at all.

I have how Clay finds out about Buffy and some of the scenes and how to play with some other stuff worked out. I even have how Buffy finds out (kind of) figured out.

The sons characters are coming back I promise. :)

But thanks for reading!
Review By [vanimi] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from bradsan
Review:
Glad you made it a long chapter instead of two short ones. I loved it even made my eyes wet.

Can't wait what you will write next.

Good as always.
Comments from author:
Awww I was hoping for a bit of teary eye.

Thank you for reading! :D
Review By [bradsan] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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