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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from sjyu
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So sorry to hear about your accident. Hope your recovery is going well. I understand that real life gets in the way of writing, and when RL gets freaky hard, writing is the last thing you want to do. So take care of yourself.
Review By [sjyu] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from garrycooper
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This is a very good story. I'm sorry about your troubles, unforunately life has a way of interrupting the things we love to do. I hope you recover and are up and about soon. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from yakuit
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i love this story and i hope you continue

i love dawn alternating between teenagesulks/pouts and anguish ... wonderfully done
Review By [yakuit] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from yakoba
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I love this story! very realistic and well written. can't wait for the next segment when you get a chance :D
Review By [yakoba] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ShayneT
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I'm sorry to hear about your accident. I'm pleased, however with this story, at least so far. A nice, slow opening like this is a perfect entre into a longer fic. You've already got mysteries to solve, people to meet and a nice sense of atmosphere. Bravo.
Review By [ShayneT] • Date [26 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LeaFairy
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Ooh, that sounds fairly ominous =) Makes me wish for more too. Anyway, I love that Dawn's not going to turn into a wereleopard, just for the sake of her not being stuck with Anita as her 'Queen'. Thank goodness! I don't if it's me and my not hate, but dislike of Anita, but I really can't stand Anita so far in this... She and her attitude are rubbing me the wrong way I guess. *shrugs* Oh well :-)

I'm loving Micah though... I like that Dawn feels a 'Tara' vibe from him. Also great twist with Nathaniel being the one who originally found her. I didn't see that coming at all! I am a little confused by Dawn's behavior though, why was she so shy, almost submissive around everyone? She always seems to me a dominant personality (she probably gets it from Buffy...) and with living on the Hellmouth and then becoming a Watcher still fighting the Big Bads, why was she acting so submissive, young, almost scared of everyone? Huh. It seems a little weird to me...

Anyhoo, this chapter was fantastic, I'm so glad that you updated! I'm sorry to hear about your RL problems though =( I hope and wish you a full recovery!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
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Well... I hope you work as hard on your rehab as you did your classes. Thanks for continuing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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Good drama. If she was living in Colorado Springs on her own, she would have been at least 18, possibly even done with college (Oxford?).
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from mariegilbert
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I hope you are feeling better and hope everything goes well for you! I'm glad you continued the story despite everything going on, it is very interesting so far!!!
Review By [mariegilbert] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from NutsContract
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Oh wow, that was amazing, I just wish there could have been more. Anita's rubbing me the wrong way again, but that's not surprising. I'm so glad you picked this story back up, looking forward to more updates. :)
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from yakuit
Review:
love the story
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [yakuit] • Date [2 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from yakuit
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Let me sing you a love song

About what I feel in my heart;

You're a flower in bloom.

In the dark, in the gloom,

It's you who brightens my day.

How many ways do I need you?

Every day, every way, come what may.

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I luv your story - happy valentine
Review By [yakuit] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mariegilbert
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I really hope you continue this! It would be very interesting to see what happens next and how Dawn deals with everything.
Comments from author:
I plan to finish this!
Review By [mariegilbert] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NicCuinn
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Very promising beginning! I love D's tenacity :) Can't wait to read more!
~Nic
Review By [NicCuinn] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WingedSeraph
Review:
Fantastic job so far; can't wait for more!
Review By [WingedSeraph] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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