Review of chapter "You Can Lock it Up and Bury it......" from CageFire
Interesting fic, unfortunately, it doesn't look like it's been updated in almost a year. Sigh. Oh well, I saw a couple other fics on your profile, and I've read a few of them before, I just hadn't thought to check your profile. But there might be a few more I'd like to read.
Review By [CageFire
] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You Can Lock it Up and Bury it......" from msdarque
Intriguing... I'd very much like to read more. Please.... :D
Review By [msdarque
] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You Can Lock it Up and Bury it......" from JediKnight
Very interesting job on this story so far, I hope you will be adding more to this story soon.
-Any other crossovers you're going to add?
Review By [JediKnight
] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You Can Lock it Up and Bury it......" from DarkFaerieYumi
O crap. Poor android. Going against a Scooby and his brothers.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi
] • Date [18 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Moves Forward" from DarkFaerieYumi
No shit she wouldn't talk to him OR her uncles OR her grandfather cuz all of them would scare any boy off with shotguns. LMAO
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi
] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JanessaRavenwood
Possibly the most ridiculous, poorly-written fanfic I have come across in quite some time. Xander Stu, munchkined-out powers, contrived crossovers with everything under the sun, equally contrived windfalls of wealth, OOC behavior, and character bashing. I think it hits every base a fanfic should NOT. Next.
Review By [JanessaRavenwood
] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkFaerieYumi
WOOT! Wonder how the boys will react to becoming uncles. LOL But this is great. I loves it.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi
] • Date [13 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Moves Forward" from darkcarnage
I'm enjoying the direction you're taking this. I liked how you showed the build up in the Xander/Faith relationship. That it wasn't just the one night and they love each other, but was a series of nights together that formed a relationship that wasn't just about sex but of comfort as well.
Review By [darkcarnage
] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Moves Forward" from Rune
Ok that is one way to deal with an overpowered Xander, have him leave Sunnydale. While he is gone something can happen that balance out the powerup he got. A new enemy, an old enemy getting power, something... I'll keep track of this fic. Good Luck.
Review By [Rune
] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Moves Forward" from kayron
I think that I get why that would make Faith smile. I don't think that anyone ever looked out for Faith, and it feels good to know that Xander would be the kind of dad who would look after his little girl.
Review By [kayron
] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Frardowin
Stories like this one are the reason people are starting to hate Xander fics.
Review By [Frardowin
] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rune
Green Lanterns are really powerful, they are limited only by Will and Imagination. Xander could likely take on Glory and win right now. GLs can fight armys so the vamps the First Evil uses would go down. Actually killing the First Evil is like killing death or entrophy. Those things are just a part of the universe, you can defeat them for a while but KILL them? Anyway with a power ring Xander is UBER so what limits does the ring have? Can it affect wood or the color yellow? So what next? Your readers are waiting.
Review By [Rune
] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpinelessPunster
Eeehhh--I agree with other reviewers that you smacked this chapter with the Plot Crane. Xander goes from Buffy's Knight to 'I'll kill you, because you did something that I totally agreed with at the time, and would have done myself if I had the power!'. Enchantment or no, no self-respecting person would have not tried to drag Faith in after what she did, and what she had boasted that she was going to do in the future. Buffy didn't even mean to hurt Faith, just subdue her and feed Angel some of her blood. (whether she would have stopped before death and switched to herself has been up for a lot of debate, but no one accused Buffy of detailed planning dementia, but -fair is fair- the dark-haired Slayer put him into the death spiral to torture Buff, so she should be the first to fix it. The whole knife in the gut was a friendly fire incident
Faith tried to kill Willow- ie, the BFF of Xan, one that he threatened Buffy with death if she just put her in danger by neglect. The hypocricy of Xander's threat to errr, Elizabeth (?!? Buffy's name is Buffy Anne Summers, dramatics aside) is kinda epicly huge, and IMO, grossly OOC. Just because you can't think of a reason to get Xander to follow up on the deceased Dick's offer and go to Smallville other than a break with the Scooby group isn't a good justification for a synthesized feud.
Don't get me wrong, I'm the biggest X/F fan that I know, but relationally, they're not an easy route, and they shouldn't be. Faith was damaged long before she got to SD, and has been touted as the Anti-Buffy for a reason. She's been lied to all her life, and so she lies to the Gang from the get-go. Not just the importance of the lies that are told but the reasons behind the lies lead to serious mistrust, and it's a bad situation, probably one of the most realistic situations of the entire show.
The rollercoaster of Xander-badassgaurdian, Xander-twinbrother, hid forhisowngood, -XanderdefeatsElderDemon, etc. I will not comment on, except to say Buffy/Giles/Willow/Oz had no plan, or you just skipped the scooby plan-talk scene, because it would force Xander to reveal his abilities, and -inadvertantly nullifies the crucial advice that Faith gives Buffy in thier Slayer dream, or did she just tell B to 'trust the Green One'?
Sorry for harsh criticism, but I would have liked a bit more verisimilitude. Also I find Supernatural to be trite and masochisticly macho.
Review By [SpinelessPunster
] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ora
Great start! Can't wait for the next chapter
Review By [ora
] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darthridian
great start. so ghantet chose xander instead of kyle at the end of emerald twilight? or is this a different way the guardians died. where are the rest of the heroes that knows the supernatural, why did they not help on the hellmouth, if they were present here they should have been keeping tabs on an active hellmouth.
well looking forward to see where you take this story.
Review By [darthridian
] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]