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Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from draconis
Review:
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It's too bad this series was never completed. It was heading to being added to my list of favorites.
Since last update by author on any stories was back in 2010, I'm assuming the author is no longer active.

Very good stories and quite well written.
Review By [draconis] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stolen Goods, Stolen Dreams" from lorwen
Review:
Great so far!
Keep up the great work! :)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from Dragonelf
Review:
I have just finished rereading the series and I hope you will get inspired to post a new chapter soon.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [13 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from mlock
Review:
Great story. Update soon.
Review By [mlock] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from Mordare
Review:
I love the story. I hope you get back to it one of these days.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from Ringmaster
Review:
Excellent work, I'm glad to see some original ideas floating around out there. I look forward to future updates. I'd give you some constructive criticism, but there's nothing negative to say about this series.

Damn good work.
Review By [Ringmaster] • Date [7 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from (Current Donor)Tanaxanth
Review:
This is one of my favorite series on the site and am hoping when you have the time (I understand far too well) to write and post new chapters, they arrive soon.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tanaxanth] • Date [12 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stolen Goods, Stolen Dreams" from TheHeartist
Review:
Just a reminder...new chapter soon? :P
Comments from author:
I would like to put one out, but unfortunately, I've been busy.

I've started college, working on a video game design course. Great course...not much free time. Learning this stuff takes a lot. It is neat seeing your program work, though, even when you start off on something small and simple.
Review By [TheHeartist] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from mountainelements
Review:
This story is really interesting, if also dread-inducing. I really like Xander's transformation, though I'm having trouble visualizing Giles willingly calling Xander Master. I'm also confused about the alternate reality. It seems like ghost Willow was supporting her best friend's career as a murderer. Why? The correlations are pretty amazing, especially Kendra as Talia. I hope that she wakes up instead of going back to Henri though. It'd probably be hard to find him now that he has a new body though.
Comments from author:
The ghost of Willow wasn't. It was the First Evil. Remember it can only take the form of someone who died. In that world, it used the opportunity to nudge things a bit. The end result being the differences when things changed back, Cordelia possessing her other self, Lex Luthor going from science nerd to senator, and the big one: Karen Kent.

Now what could the First Evil possibly want with the imbalance introduced by a Kryptonian existing where she shouldn't, I wonder?
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from kelvin
Review:
great so far can't wait for the next few chapters.
Review By [kelvin] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from Dragonelf
Review:
I like what you have done with this story so far and I hope you will get inspired to update it.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Crisp::

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Most of the things worth doing in the world had been
declared impossible before they were done.
- Louis D. Brandeis
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [3 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stolen Goods, Stolen Dreams" from Denthar
Review:
Just reached the end of your story for the 5th time, it gets better everytime I read it.. :)
Comments from author:
Heh. I appreciate that, and you're welcome. It'll take me a bit to get the next part out. Technical difficulties on my end.
Review By [Denthar] • Date [20 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from darkcarnage
Review:
Another great chapter. Does Cordelia and Buffy know that Xander is Batman? I don't think you mentioned it in this or the last story.
Comments from author:
Nope, they don't know. They're operating on the assumption that he's a badguy, considering their experience with him is entirely with his counterpart. So every clue they manage to dig up on him being Batman, their preconceptions make them interpret wrong. Xander isn't clean, what with how he got his money, but he isn't bad, either.
Review By [darkcarnage] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plans in Motion" from Orchamus
Review:
Always good to see more of this out.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Complications" from TheHeartist
Review:
Really good stuff, as is consistant with this series. I'm looking forward to a Power Girl/Glory throwdown at some point, but I'm still chuffed to bits that you're doing your own version of Arkham Asylum (the game.) I like Angel/Two-Face as a manipulator, just as canon Angelus is, toying with his enemies and making calculating behind the scenes moves. Giving him Wolfram and Hart to play with makes for a worthy opponent for Batman, also a good way of getting Batman's rogue gallery into the mix. I'm assuming the monks have chosen Xander as Dawn's brother now that Buffy is dead? Hmmm...Dawn as Robin, Gunn as Nightwing...just thinking out loud, this is your story after all. Much enjoying reading it, keep it up :)
Comments from author:
I'm aiming for a bit worse on the Angel/Two-Face front than Angelus. He may not have ending the world in mind, but he did burn down a house to get at the people inside, circumventing the no-invite rule. He's got a lot of resources behind him, and lastly, he's the most difficult vampire to kill on the planet now. With the Gem of Amara embedded in his hand, he's not going to be easily bumped off. Sure, any member of the Justice League could do it in ten seconds flat. The trouble is getting them.
Review By [TheHeartist] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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