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Review of chapter "Bad Intentions" from banner
Review:
I've always loved The Stand, and you are doing a good job of portraying the frantic fear of the beginning of the book. This is definitely one to watch.
Comments from author:
I always liked the idea, and this just seemed to work out well. I do have plans for it in the future, I just don't know when that will be.

Thanks for the compliment and review.
Review By [banner] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bad Intentions" from Kovac
Review:
Once security and order are removed from our lives, the sleeping beast we all got inside of us awakens and fear, rage and survival instincts take precedence on everything else. Good people have it worse because even if they try to behave like human beings, the ones behaving like cruel animals don't let them have that luxury. Kill or be killed becomes the rule. Xander and Cordelia are quickly learning that awful truth.

Nice job so far.
Comments from author:
That's exactly what I'm going for. It's also the main reason I had Cordelia shoot that bastard, instead of just letting him bleed out. I just didn't want to cover ground twice, since I already did that stuff in Headhunters.

Glad you've liked it, and thanks for the review.
Review By [Kovac] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bad Intentions" from CPTSkip
Review:
What a nasty update. Well done, but quite horrible. Poor Cordy and poor Doyle.
Comments from author:
I wanted it to be nasty, so that unlike in Headhunters, Cordy has her head in the game right away. As much fun as it is to make her an unholy bitch, I just wanted to get into the story.

I actually like Doyle a lot, it was sad he got killed off as fast as he was in the show. Not that I can really complain now though. Still, I decided he should go out a hero, instead of just lying in his own filth.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Better or Worse?" from Maeven
Review:
loving this story so far (The Stand is one of my fav Stephen King novels), keep up the good work, hope to see updates often :)
Comments from author:
It's mine as well, to be honest, I normally just don't have the time to read his stuff. I think the last one I actually got all the way through was Cell. I'm hoping to update this soon, it just depends on when the muse kicks in.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Maeven] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Better or Worse?" from Kovac
Review:
Nice start. I wonder how Xander and Cordelia lost are going to survive the frightening universe of The Stand and, may be, may be, with a lot of luck, get Flagg's head.

Blood, sweat and tears ahead, IMHO.

Keep it up!
Comments from author:
C&X will have a long way to go before they can face Flagg. First they've got to get out of the city, and you never know who, or what is still out there. It's not going to be pretty, no matter how it turns out.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Kovac] • Date [30 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Better or Worse?" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very emotional update. You darn near had me crying several times. I'm glad Cordy made it and they are together. The problem is, what now? Most people are dead and the Scoobies ain't coming back. I can't wait to see where your story goes from here.
Comments from author:
They're going to have to find a way out of the city, but I'm sure it won't be as easy as it sounds, is it ever with these two?

Thanks for the compliment and review.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Better or Worse?" from darkcarnage
Review:
Good story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far, I'm hoping to have chapter four up within the next two weeks.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [darkcarnage] • Date [30 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Incognito Intervention" from CPTSkip
Review:
I thought you did a nice job with Leo. Was the Bright Lady an ascended version of Cordy? I know, just keep reading. I am glad this universe's Cordy is still alive. We know all the other Scoobies are dead, but I noticed Tara hadn't met up with Willow yet. Is there a chance Tara is also one of the 10%? Having a witch around would be really handy. And did ADAM get activated before the Big Death? I sure hope not. But at least Xander doesn't have to worry about Glory with Dawn already being dead and all. I look forward to reading more of your story. And thank you for not adding Zombies. Lol!
Comments from author:
I won't rule Tara out, but I won't make any promises either. ADAM won't be an issue, this is still very early season 4. As for zombies, I've got enough of them already, I'd rather not add more.

Thanks for the insight, and review man. Both are appreciated.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something's in the Air" from ReadsaLot
Review:
Heh. That's one way to get Captain Trips going. Nice, horrific way to cross these two universes.

There is one nit I must make though - the lockdown problem stretches this story to the breaking point. Remember, this *is* a military base. More than two people would have been able to call the lockdown. In the Stand itself the only reason the disease breached quarantine was that one guy grabbed his family and ran. Without that, the Stand would have ended in the first three pages.

More believable would be for the spores to clear the ducts into the college air before they managed to lock the base down.
Comments from author:
I considered all of your points while I was writing this, I went along the lines of people fleeing the area to make it spread as quickly as possible. Lab techs afraid of what they'd been exposed to, and soldiers worried about desertion charges. Since the people of Sunnydale wouldn't know what hit them, it'd drag on a longer then I'd like.

Also I see Walsh as a complete egomaniac, I just can't see her giving control for something that big, to people she says as beneath her.

Thank you for your insight, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Review By [ReadsaLot] • Date [15 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something's in the Air" from Shadowcub
Review:
Oh freaking crap~!

You weren't kidding. I noticed his powers were the mind control type.
Comments from author:
It'll be nice to see what else he brings to the table this time around. Thank you.
Review By [Shadowcub] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Something's in the Air" from Mcspender
Review:
Flagg, Randall Flagg, that dude is the definitive definition of the word "bastard" =S.
Comments from author:
I think that's why I like him so much. He's just the type of villain, whom when you go up against, you just know your fucked. Thanks for the comment.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Something's in the Air" from batzulger
Review:
Sweet start.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I hope you like the rest.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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