Review of chapter "A Future Uncertain" from Nyaneave
It's a good fic, it seems a little scripted though.
Review By [Nyaneave
] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Future Uncertain" from Eureka
Nice ideas for the story, but you really need to flesh it out some more. I really think that if you continue this story that it will be really good. And I really do hope that you do continue this story.
(If you need a Beta, I would be glad to check over your work for you. I have done it before.)
Review By [Eureka
] • Date [3 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]