Thank you for a beautifully blended story. x

I just finished reading this story again, and I really enjoyed it. Thank you for letting us read your work, and I can't wait to read more of it.

Sincerely

John

I have just finished your story and I LOVE IT. At first I thought the concept was a little strange, never played HALO (got to love Wiki), but I always love a good Xander story. Having you add God and the Heavenly Host was also a cool thing to do and how you portrayed Hades was great, he does get bad press, and believable.

Thanks for the story.

Omg.....this is so the best story I have read in quite awhile...and seriously the whole " somebody left the mute on" line had me LMAO..kudos on a wonderful story.

Okaaay... It took me a second read to actually get into, but well worth the time.

This is a great story, I just re-read it and had forgotten how wonderful it was!

Thanks for a great story!

loved this story!!
loved that Xander got with Tara too

Thank you for this Fic.

Im happy to have read this story, more then once i passed over it because i thought the banner art was for something else.

But this story was a great tale and i hope to see more of your work.

mjimeyg just finished re-reading your story titled ( The Champion ) , One of the best , Buffy The Vampire Slayer - Stargate - Halo Crossovers Starring Xander I have ever read .

Its many great details and Character development’s make it a fun read , While It is good stuff I hope your MUSE will help you come up with a fantastic Sequel sooner Rather than Later .

I began reading your story when you first posted, but quickly abandoned it for some reason which I now can't remember (most likely it was a technical issue) so when I picked it up again yesterday, I started from the beginning, and have just finished it. You have written a great story, but you do have a significant problem with the technicalities of writing: you desperately need a beta. Some have said that imagination is more important, that technically correct doesn't mean great, but learning the correct skills of writing will help writing a truly wonderful story. To have written so much shows a passion for your craft, but you do need to spend the time and effort to truly learn the skills to become a master craftsman. Find a skilled and sympathetic beta who can explain things to you, and work with them. It will show in your writing, and it's truly for the best.

ok I love this story. I was thinking since he is a god then you could make a sequel of a buch of oneshots of him helping on differents planets/realities. Like naruto or fairy tail or battlestar galatica or something.

Pretty good story. I just spent three days reading it. My only complaint was the last chapter. It seemed kind of rushed.

I do hope that you write more for this.

I have just spent the last 2 days reading this..and its a great work of excellence. I can't wait for the sequel. Great work mate, ignore the haters.

mjimeyg: Re The Champion I must say I have enjoyed reading this story this is a most interesting mix of crossovers
, I also think that a Sequel,To this story would be most intriguing so I do hope your Muse will let you Write it .

Excellent fic. 1,000/10


Not to be annoying/rude, but when are you going to write/post the sequal?