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Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from agnar
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Lost me totally here, having Xander pander and sacrifice to satisfy a fucking overblown firefly twat who has just as much misplaced ego as the rest of her moronic fellow 'ascended' ancients, rather than just telling her to go fuck herself.

Utterly ridiculous bullshit.
Review By [agnar] • Date [10 May 14] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from amandaaj
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I had bypassed this story a few times when I realized that I should take the time and really read it. I am so glad I did. First and foremost, I want to applaud and thank you for a very enjoyable experience. I took all weekend to read it and I really do hope that there is a sequel. If you don't post it here, please advise as to where it will be.

Xander is one of my favorite characters and your pairing with Gaia was very interesting.
Also your cast of characters made for some very enjoyable moments.

Again thank you.
Review By [amandaaj] • Date [24 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from BigMike
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Since I first came across this story a few years ago, I have read it three times now, it is one of my all time favorite fan fictions!
Review By [BigMike] • Date [9 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from LaraBr
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Seriously enjoyed this story and would very much like to see a sequel.
Review By [LaraBr] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Paradoxicality
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Giant Stake
oh gods
the funnies
the giggles
the laughs
the hilarity
Oh the Hilarity
Review By [Paradoxicality] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from myrddyn
Review:
ok i really liked this story! i gotta give props for originallity! i do find it a shame that you haven't done a sequel or even any other stories! i'd like to see you do one where xander dresses up as
an original character based on himself with the pwers of the amazo android from the justice league
(but to also have reality traveling powers too lets say he got them from an o.c metahuman that he met) and to have him travel many different realities (e.g marvel universe for lots of mutant powers and to help out against threats there, stargate for tech and to help out against the goul'd wraith ori ect, also nice to get him in star wars-trek and battlestar galactica just as beggining examples of ideas and the good thing is it never ends until you get bored and have him kill of the pricks that be aka the fallen and the infernal powers!) well good luck and here looking forward and hoping you get back too some awesome writing!
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [15 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Delkatar
Review:
Great story so far!!!
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Benji
Review:
Hi I am enjoying your story. I have only one big piece of advice. Next time you make a story with religious figures make them equals. Do not place the supreme deity of one religion above the supreme deity of another. As what is most commonly called a "pagan" it is rather disconcerting to see one my personal goddesses placing the christen god above herself. As I do not believe this is meant as an insult to my beliefs I will continue to read, however as a writer you should be careful to not insult your fan base.
Review By [Benji] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from amandaaj
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Ok, first and foremost, when you were first writing this story, it was helping me focus on what I considered a great work of art. Why? My brother and been diagnosed with cancer and it was terminal. The message of hope and change kept me going and help me to cope with what would be a future loss.

I have read and reread this story a number of times and each time I marvel at your story telling ability. I see where you said that there might be a sequel, and I hope you write it. Don't let other people's words or actions keep you from using your gifts. I am very pleased to say that you may consider me an avid fan and friend. Have a good day and God bless.
Review By [amandaaj] • Date [2 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from BluStorm
Review:
i loved this fic. Tonane is great liked how you had him in this fic. i always wanted more of him in other fic because he was so likeable. thank you for all your hard work on this fic.
Review By [BluStorm] • Date [2 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from Misty
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Thank you for a beautifully blended story. x
Review By [Misty] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from Moontrap
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I just finished reading this story again, and I really enjoyed it. Thank you for letting us read your work, and I can't wait to read more of it.

Sincerely

John
Review By [Moontrap] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from Freiheit
Review:
I have just finished your story and I LOVE IT. At first I thought the concept was a little strange, never played HALO (got to love Wiki), but I always love a good Xander story. Having you add God and the Heavenly Host was also a cool thing to do and how you portrayed Hades was great, he does get bad press, and believable.

Thanks for the story.
Review By [Freiheit] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from ThePickle
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Omg.....this is so the best story I have read in quite awhile...and seriously the whole " somebody left the mute on" line had me LMAO..kudos on a wonderful story.
Review By [ThePickle] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 40" from DavidFraser
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Okaaay... It took me a second read to actually get into, but well worth the time.
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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