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Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice. Good to see them working as a team and settling into a good life. They're wounded and cute :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from Jinxy
Review:
This makes me want to read the stories you mentioned. Good job and good portrayal of Faith.
Review By [Jinxy] • Date [31 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from Ansku
Review:
Good one :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [21 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from laoshi
Review:
I’d like to take a moment to swivel round in my chair in circles because no one’s ever written a story for me before. It actually being good is just the icing on the cake or may be that’s the hope that you’ve kick started your muse.

You have a wonderful way of getting the reader to experience your viewpoint characters inner life and I really enjoyed pent up frustrated Faith in the first section. The whole Faith is jealous of all the attention McKay gives Rory but doesn’t know why she’s angry because she won’t admit her feelings for Rodney bit was brilliant. And that’s before you add in Sheppard being the one to confront her when he’s in the early stages of admitting his own attraction to Rory.

It’s very easy to see shades of Faith’s envy over Buffy’s “perfect life” in her comments to John. Sheppard’s line about being used to being the one everyone gives up on just killed me. Any time Faith is lost for words is great.

The Second scene does a wonderful job of explaining what Faith sees in McKay. I love the way you tie in Teyla and her baby into the Faith/Rory comparison. Teyla’s directness and insight are always refreshing.

I love watching each iteration of somebody thinks Faith and Rodney should be together but Rory’s how long have you been dating line is my favourite.

Wow, Rodney doesn’t ask Faith out so much as randomly crash into her. The or something line cracked me up. I got your back was a great ending.

So, I’m going to be cheeky and since I know you’re not going to merge this verse into the main Physics of spin story would a vignette set further into the Rodney/Faith relationship be totally out of the question? Faith being Rory’s stepmother in fact if not in name just seems so alive with possibilities.

Failing that the next short piece I’d most like to see from you is a fill in the blank for Inevitable which shows us at least part of the story of how Harry became Meng Die’s human servant before it all ended in tears.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from BillieBog
Review:
Went back and read the first two stories. This is a great AU, love Faith and love SGA. Never thought of Faith/McKay but it could definitely work.

Would love to see more, and would suggest if you know how, to tie the stories together as a series so readers and lurkers like me will be able to find them.

Thanks so much, love your writing,
Billie
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [25 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from leelaa
Review:
So extremely sorry for the late review.
I got the notifications from TtH and Livejournal that you had put up this story, did a fist-pumping mini-dance that you were writing again, promptly went over and read the new fic at both TtH and LJ, loved it and for nostalgia, went and reread 'Something Worthwhile' and 'Floating, Magic and Memory'.
And then, I forgot to review. (very sheepish smile)
Thanks for the fic which is as perfect in characterization and storyplay as your fics always are. I do hope you add on to this and give us more of the Rodney-Faith pairing. I never thought I'd even like this pairing, and your writing has me rooting for them.
And another thanks for your assurance on LJ that you'd be getting around to your other fics as well at some point. It's been months and years of reading and rereading every one of them, and the hope of seeing them continued is... YIPPEE!
Review By [leelaa] • Date [24 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from SilverWave
Review:
I was totally lost for a moment then... it all clicked back in to place :-)

Cheers.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from Damia
Review:
Freaking awesome!
Review By [Damia] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from MarcusRowland
Review:
My original thought was to ask for a story with Faith, Rory and Ziva but I'm not entirely sure the universe would survive...
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from bucksavage
Review:
Very well done. The characterizations are spot on, and you have the witty banter down to a science; the Sheppard/Faith banter in particular.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from joshlamont
Review:
I hate you. I really, really hate you. You can't just drop off tantalizing 4k shorts and disappear!
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [22 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spinning in Circles" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Very nice. One of the best depictions of Faith that I've read in a while.

Now you just need to write a story with Faith, Rory, and Ziva :-)
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [22 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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