This is a neat story. Very imaginative. Can't wait to see what'll happen next for the intrepid duo. Also, did the star wear off for Joyce? If she is stuck in invincible mode, it becomes odd since Jana can't/won't touch her. Also, did you ever see the online series 'There Will be Brawl?'
Review By [misterq] • Date [29 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Storming Dark World Castle" from Gideon
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So how many lives do they have each?
Comments from author:
Good question... You know I haven't really thought of that. *Goes to ponder the response*
Review of chapter "Storming Dark World Castle" from CPTSkip
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Sorry for this late comment. I almost missed this update and I don't want your to think I had given up on your wonderfully bazaar story.
Lol! When I read the Metal Sonic say, “You will be terminated,” I just realized that Dr. Eggman had to be a Whovian. And as Buffy and Faith once said, it pays to be a hot chick with superpowers and it is nice to see Janna and Joyce living up to their standards.
I so look forward to reading more of your story. And I would like to remind you that unless Janna never really loved Giles, she too is bisexual. I wonder what Joyce thinks of Janna's piercings? Remember the "earring" that wasn't an earring Giles found the first episode we met "Jenny Calendar"? Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sub-Con Dreams" from CrystalBlaze
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I am highly amused and not at all surprised that Joyce is a closet gamer. I just feel sorry for all the pipe jokes about to be produced, as you just know they are going to be commented and snarked on by the lovely duo...
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Not Rated
I am finding your story to be totally insane and quite delightful. More, please?
Comments from author:
Soon. I'm a little dissapointed that not more people are commenting on it. I mean it's quirky, it has a pairing that I think is completely not-of-the-normal/typical and it's a Crossover where Joyce is dead and kind of loving it. SNICKER
Review of chapter "Life, Death and Sub-Con" from CPTSkip
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Janna and Joyce? Yep, I've never seen that pairing before. But now that I think about it, I like it. I do look forward to finding out what the frak is going on. Liked your beginning, now go and write more! Please?