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Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from agnar
Review:
You killed this for me. Rather than a good fic about buffy-verse folks becoming the justice league in marvel-verse and then doing a better job of it than the marvel boneheads... You have for some reason decided to apparently bring the entire fucking DC-verse over. Sorry but it's just too much, you'll have too many story lines, villains, etc. going on.

If you ever continue this, rewrite this last chapter at least. Remove central city, the legion of doom and any other DC extras you brought in. It was bad enough with Cordy actually being Diana somehow, and bringing Themyscira over. But entire cities, all the villains and so on too? No, it just screws the whole thing up.

It's a shame too because this *was* looking like an excellent fic. But I couldn't get past the legion of doom showing up to take the helicarrier, that was the last straw.
Review By [agnar] • Date [14 Feb 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from danny
Review:
great job. Though how about some more action between Joyce and xander
Review By [danny] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from Balder
Review:
Please continue this story.
Review By [Balder] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from gmaniscool
Review:
I really enjoyed your story. I hope that you will continue it someday.
Review By [gmaniscool] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from moringstar
Review:
pleae update this is a great flic.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from moringstar
Review:
pleae update this is a great flic.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
I wouldn't mind seeing this fic updated.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from Jearom
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So any chance of this being continued? I'm really digging it - there's not enough Marvell/DC crossovers out there.
Review By [Jearom] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, I hope you continue it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from Cyberwere
Review:
I've just reread this fic and realized I hadn't commented on it yet.

First off, I say kudos to developing a truly decent idea. I've found this story to be well written, well paced and definitely able to keep my interest.

That being said, I do have to say it's starting to feel like you're artificially "dumbing down" the Marvel universe. While I understand that the so-called Illuminati the "geniuses" at Marvel decided to develop are freaking morons of the highest caliber, a great many of the other heroes in the 'verse are not. Perhaps you've plans to demonstrate that later and if so, my apologies.

Second, I really have to call shenanigans on the introduction of the Spectre. The Spectre is a major deus ex machina, which is why DC so rarely uses him I believe. And seeing as how this is supposed to be taking place in the Marvel Universe, I believe that an entity of the Spectre's power showing up would have Eternity showing up to lay down some rules and even possibly the Living Tribunal.

All in all I am enjoying the story you're telling, I just feel it's starting to veer too far into DC is greater than Marvel.
Review By [Cyberwere] • Date [7 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from DarthPayne
Review:
I do hope we'll get to see another chapter at some point....
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from MageMan
Review:
It's sad to see that this story is inactive and incomplete, at only 5 chapters. Then again there are some that couldn't get anywhere as engaging as this story that are only one chapter long. hope you come back to this and continue please.
Review By [MageMan] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from mlock
Review:
Great story. Update soon.
Review By [mlock] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from lorddamian
Review:
this is a good story so far please continue it asap.
Review By [lorddamian] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sunken Land Part Two" from DarthPayne
Review:
Still loving this fic. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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